this is one of the best stories I have ever read

plz update soon

Wow.. I really love your fanfiction.. There really isn't anything that I can see that you need to improve on... Keep it up!

This Fic is bloody gorgeous!It's bootyfull! Gosh, update will you? Lol

I'm dying to know what happens next! Jesus...must...breathe.

Update ASAP PLEASE.

With compliments,

Anita a.k.a. Posh London Totty

Ciao

That was good. I love when Edward suprises Bella. :) A few spelling mistakes, but thats ok.

Update again soon!

Alison

haha it was okay. but oh bella is sneaky! hahaha great chapter. jack sounds...interesting.

xx EmoDre

oh my god...wow. i'm going to go read the next chapter now then. but i cant believe edward just left! sheesh...great job though

xx EmoDre

Hey, good job on exploring these issues. I've often wondered if Bella would ever concider how hard it would be for her to resist blood if she were changed to a vampire. keep up the good writing.I'm excited to read more.

I liked it. I think Bella should be a little more freaked out that she's being chased by an evil vampire...again. Just my opinion.

Good job and update again soon!

Alison

update soon please!

I love it so far! I can completely understand the storyline you've got going and have got almost everything perfect so far. One thing I will point out is that I noticed a good few typos. It's nothing big, just be a bit more careful

-Giga

AH! CLIFFHANGERS! HATE THOSE! but, nice story so far. i'm interested.

Oh wow. What is Bella surrounded by at the end?

Ok. So wouldn't Edward be able to smell when Bella cut herself? Just curious.

Update again soon! Another good chapter

Alison

haha this was cool. that was a horrible dream though. m well update soon please

xx EmoDre

Interesting. Oh poor Bella, having to dream about attacking her mom and phil.

Update soon!

Alison

I really like where this story is going and I hope you update soon! :)