I almost cried when I read this. You have officially earned my respect with this poem. It was awesome and may God bless you.

*shivers* Awsome. We need somthing like that today.

This poem is SO true.

*sniff sniff*
when ever i think about this poem, it makes me wanna cry!
btw-great poem

This is a very pretty poem, even though it is about something very sad. Nice job!

Beautifully done! God Bless and write on!

That was beautiful...I like the idea of everything stopping when Jesus died. It kind of echoes the teardrop sequence in the Passion of the Christ. Good Job, and God Bless!

Luv,
Miss Pookamonga ;-P

i really liked that one, it's one of my favs...:)

I loved that! It was beautiful, and... may I use it to show to other people and stuff? (Giving you credit of course.)

It's hard to explain what you wrote but it does make sense. It pierces my heart at the thought of why He died. Why God, His Father act would actually sacrifice His Son for worthless people like us. He loves us more than anything...more than the sun and the stars that he taught how to shine. Thank you for writing this and making me realize that His death was for a cost to save us all. Amen! God bless!

This is my favorite of all your work! I love the relation to the two gladiators stopping. It's really really touching. I also like the holy men shivering. Good work! :D

You spelled "bless" wrong in your disclaimer.

Great. Nicely done and wasn't dragging on. Awesome job. ^_^ *thumbs up*

very nice. A nice little thing to read before I go off to Church today. It is great to see that people write some stuff like this. Keep it up and God bless.