Yay sasuke has feelings! Good job!

ohh great great story its like i can picture it in my head its jus great

Nice. That means he accepted their baby right?

I hope you can make a sequel or something ^_^

Oh I so loved it.

aww... sweet!!

Very nice. I like the name "Hikari" cuz I liked Kari as well ^^

keep it up ^^

so dramatic... how i wish it would really happen... hey how about having a fight afterwards and then they will realize what they had done and they once agian a family...hehehehe... just a suggestion...

I love this son angsty and poetic. Beautiful!

Even though I find myself wanting more, you were right.

Less is sometimes more, and I like the way you put in a kind of open ending. Open in the way that the reader can make their own ending--happily ever after or not.

I love this and it's definitely going on my favorites. Great job!

this short story was so beautiful

this was interesting and good! :D

aw! i liky!! byby~yu~

Oh Sigh. That's adorable. I get butterflies in my stomach each time I read it. The happy, satisfied kind of butterflies. Simple and Sweet. Beautiful job.

i liked it. short and simple but it said a lot.

A... I'm enjoying it. SasuSaku love. Well-done!! :)