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RKOFan14
2008-06-13
ch 29,
abusei love this story. I never thought of Sayid and Claire as a couple and if someone wud have mentioned them as one i wud have thought that wud be weird but you made me love it. update soon
itsnotaboutlove
2008-02-15
ch 29,
abuseHey, this is really good! I hope you update soon!
freckles1230
2007-10-08
ch 29, anon.
abuseokay, i'm honestly not sure: Is there ANY chance of skate happening again? and i honestly can't see kate divorcing sawyer just cuz they fight-i mean, they would, but it would just be how their relationship goes, they'd always make up...or at least that's what i think. just wondering if there is any hope for the couple.
SassyLostie
2007-10-05
ch 29,
abuselol! I LOVED the chapter. Very real written and realistic sounding. Poor Jimmy, he certainly is missing his Daddy. :( I hope he and Kate work things out, tho I would like to see some more Sayid/Claire soon. :D]

Update soon!
ParisAmy
2007-10-05
ch 29,
abuse"And if that herd don't trample the Others, papa's gonna buy you a - " she looked at little Jimmy again.

"Dozen brothers! A dozen brothers!"

Kate shook her head. "That's ridiculous. You can't buy brothers."

"Daddy could! If he needed to daddy could! You're not singing it right! It's not fair! You keep stopping. It's not fair!"-LOL!


Jimmy is the cutest kid ever! :) Hope we hear more of the song!! Update soon
SombraAlma
2007-10-05
ch 29,
abuseYou've managed to make this chapter both amusing and heartbreaking. I love Sawyer's version of Hush Little Baby; it's very...Sawyer, for lack of a better description. And Jimmy's insistence on how his Daddy sings the song is poignant and so very real. Well done.
FebruarySong
2007-10-05
ch 29,
abuseAw! I love Sawyer's version of Hush Little Baby! I can totally see him singing that to a mini!Sawyer. Very cute. :)
SassyLostie
2007-09-19
ch 28,
abuse:( Sawyer and Kate are divorced. It surprises me how civilized they managed to make life on the island. A library, actual marriages, schools...so strange, yet so interesting. :D And very different from where they are in the show now. Nice job.

Update soon!
FebruarySong
2007-09-19
ch 28,
abuseSkylar! I was utterly charmed by Sayid taking the comic book out for Hurley's benefit. That is absolutely something that he would do and it makes me fall in love with Sayid even more. The truly lovely thing about your fanfiction is that you have everyone so IC that when I fall in love with your characters, I fall in love with the real characters from the show, too. I'm not just falling in love with an imitation of them. Brava! Sad that Sawyer was so affected by the divorce, but he recovered well. Great chapter. I'm wondering what the next holiday is? Or is this just picking up the thread of a previous plotline and will now cover everyday life? I'm cool with either one. This is pretty much the only Sayid/Claire pairing I've ever read, so it's refreshing. :)
ParisAmy
2007-09-19
ch 28,
abuseAw sad that kate and sawyer got divorced :(


But it was a great chap, hope we see more little james soon.


Update soon :)
moonhowler15
2007-09-18
ch 27,
abuseAll I can think to say for this chapter is "wow". It was beautifully written and made me think.
SassyLostie
2007-09-12
ch 27,
abuseAww, I liked that it was Sayid centric and talked about Shannon. And the thought of him teaching brought a smile to my face. He's one of those smart guys who tends to get frustrated when people don't understand what he finds simple, huh? xD Great job!

Update soon!
FebruarySong
2007-09-12
ch 27,
abuseSkylar, I write this review with trembling fingers. This chapter made me cry. You have such a powerful way with words. I'm afraid to say more, lest I spoil my appreciate with worthless phrases, so -- thank you.
moonhowler15
2007-09-10
ch 26,
abuseI can understand Sawyer wanting and trying to be a good father, but probably losing his patience a lot of the time.
"Allergies to what? To doing what you're told? Now pick up those toys or I'm going to show you the back of my … " the left side of Sawyer's lips froze and then twitched into speech again, "time-out stool where I'll make you sit for five minutes while you think deep thoughts about your feelings and why you feel you have to be such a smart –" Made me laugh, but it was also a good example of Sawyer's parenting skills.
"He could rant and rave all he wanted, stomp his little feet on the sand, whine on and off again for hours, but, at the end of the day, every day, without condition, Kate would still reach out that hand, as dependably as the sun rises and sets, and gently stroke his bent little head with affection." Wonderful description and line.
skate fan
2007-09-08
ch 26, anon.
abuseplease dont let them get divorced. im a huge skate fan and got so excited when they got married. please let them stay together.
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