great story

great story.

great story.

I really enjoyed this story! In my book, Dalton Lowne will ALWAYS be a clown! I'm only sorry that I didn't discover this story years ago. ARGH!

Good story like what you did. The only thing I would of changed would be that I would have put the story in Chapters, because its just a litte long and takes a whjile to read. Other then that its great

I liked this story. Interesting premise, nice handling. I always thought Harm would make a good father glad I am not the only one.
The incerpts of what really happened on JAG episodes was cute and well done as well!

You did a really good job with the story. Just one thing. I think Harm would probably after 11 years be hitting Commodore. (Rear Admiral LH)

OMW! I AM IN AWE! YOU ARE THE ABSOLUTE MOST BEST AUTHOR ON THIS WHOLE SITE! I WORSHIP YOU *bowbowbow* LOL!

The story line was good and captured my attention clear through to the end. I enjoyed the whole thing except the anti-marriage bit at the end. To me it showed a lack of commitment and didn't set well with the rest of the storyline of them becoming a complete family. Something I would consider next time. Other than that you did a wonderful job! Congrats!

I really enjoyed this story! You did a great job!

Your story was good, but eleven years is kinda long, sequal?

Your story was good, but eleven years is kinda long, sequal?

I really liked this story. It was cool. Gotta love the 5 years old kickin everyones ass

love it

Hi this is a great story, except for one thing. Kat cannot have a purple belt. She's only five. It takes about 5 years to get it. She'd have to have been taking karate since she was born.