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| remoob1513 2008-01-11 ch 6, | abuseOh this is a cute fic but why no updates? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
| Shannon Gibbs 2007-06-05 ch 6, | abuseWoo-hoo, an update! Not sure how I missed that - I'm putting this little savage on story alert so I don't miss it again! I'm really enjoying and I guess my vote is for who you're pairing Holly with. This will probably be the only story I'll read where she's paired with someone, so I'm curious to know. |
| Mma63 2007-06-05 ch 6, | abuseI'll keep following but more action is needed and not enough of Nick and Greg. I have my concerns about ships because there's a lot of very fluffy stories at the site, ok some are nice but lots are wasting of time. Keep close to the characters and the spirit of the show. |
| Mma63 2007-06-05 ch 4, | abuseMore than a chapter itself I appreciate your concern with readers and the clues about what's coming forward. That was really kind from you. Your stile is very interesting and the story looks pretty close to the real show. You said you're going to explore more episodes and my curious to know which of them. |
| Mma63 2007-06-05 ch 3, | abuseI just found your fic today an after 3 chapters looks very interesting (I missed Nick - always my fav - and some Greg but you made a promise at the end of the second chapter, so...let's wait to see what coming next). I love good CSI's stories and good crime cases don't thing pairings are mandatory. The characters of the show , their friendship and the nature of their work could provide lots of inspiration to any creative author. I'm a huge CSI LV since the first episode. Keep the good work. |
| csifreak04 2007-06-04 ch 6, | abuseThis story is building up nicely. What do you have in store? I can't wait to read the next chapter. You Rock! |
| Drusilla Braun 2007-06-04 ch 6, | abuseSince it's not Grissom that I can ask for I'd have to ask for Catherine, but I don't want an answer. I like not knowing so I'm not asking. This is great. I'm kinda curious as to how Warrick knows Catherine's family is loaded because we never really find out she has access to a lot of money until we discover Sam is her dad. In fact it seemed more like she was struggling being a single mother. Also I thought that only Grissom really knew of her close relationship with Sam, at least thats what I gathered throughout the show. That just confused me a bit, Warrick knowing Catherine's family is loaded if Catherine doesn't even know it yet. Kind of weird. |
| necira 2007-06-03 ch 6, | abuseI'm glad to see that you've updated again, I had to go back and re-read the earlier chapters to remember everything. Looking forward to your next update...umm, I'm not sure which 'ship I'd be interested in, probably Sara or Warrick |
| Shannon Gibbs 2007-05-24 ch 5, | abuseI love having Holly alive. She was one of my favorite characters. I'm looking forward to seeing the continuation of her storyline especially. PS - Could you point me in the direction of some of the other Holly stories you've read? |
| Dorothy Of Kansas 2007-05-06 ch 5, | abuseThis story seems interesting. I'm really curious about the Grissom/Sara past that they have. And i am a major G/S shipper for them but i don't mind if you put them with other people. I was hoping for a Holly/Warrick shipping for ages so yey for having a little chemistry for them. Overall this story is really in depth and very well written. I'm virtually hugging you!! |
| csifreak04 2007-02-26 ch 5, | abuseI'm glad that Holly is able to go home. I hope she makes a full recovery. I really like all the ideas you have for this story and I can't wait for the next chapter. Until then... |
| SassySasha19 2007-02-26 ch 5, | abuseYay, I'm so glad that you updated. Nice chapter, I like having some background on Sara. Also, I think it's cool and a bit frustrating (hehe) that you're going to keep us guessing about the pairings. I do have my favorites, but I will keep an open mind, I promise. Please update soon. |
| Drusilla Braun 2007-02-25 ch 5, | abuseThis is really good great job. |
| Just Thinking 2007-02-25 ch 5, | abuseKind of a connective chapter, but still valuable info. I'm looking forward to more, can't wait to see the relationships, should be interesting. |
| megslife 2007-02-24 ch 5, | abuse"I ship all over the place, so it won’t be obvious who I’m bringing together right away, and even when people are together there will be difficulties. Oh well, all I ask of my readers is that they approach this story with an open mind and watch the characters develop." AMEN! finally someone else who isnt loyal to just one ship. I'm excited to ride this out and find out what happens. I love that you kept Holly alive. I think it will make the team have a different dynamic and Sara's past... I'm anxious to see how u develop that. this, i can already tell, is going to be a KICK ASS fic. SO excited |