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avtekkenhearts
2009-12-02 . chapter 27
Oh my goodness, this is in my top three favorite fanfictions of all time. This story is so good, I really wish that it could've happened this way, it would've been a much better ending to the story. Please update soon or ima die
afitre
2009-11-26 . chapter 27
I'd rather you updated once than all my other favorite authors updated one hundred times! Seriously.
erika giggles
2009-11-25 . chapter 10
i've just remembered something...
during chapter 27, ryuuzaki & misa were arguing over the bodyguard issue:
"Misa will get a dog, then," she said. "A big, mean dog who will bark and scare people away."
"You don't like dogs," he told her.

i was a bit confused at how he knew that fact but when i went back to re-read some of the chapters, i found it:

"Hey, Ryuuzaki-san, do you like cats or dogs better?"

"Does it really matter?"

"People say you can judge someone's personality on which one they like. Misa likes cats. She doesn't like anything that's too dependent."


DAMN! that conversation was a while ago. i often get the feeling that ryuuzaki tends to tune out as misa rambles on, but this just proves that he actually listens & remembers.
Esmenet
2009-11-22 . chapter 27
MISA. ♥ She's still not quite my favourite Death Note character, but she's getting close. (I admit, I was kind of hoping she'd push Light off the roof last chapter - I knew it wasn't going to happen, but I wanted it to.) Also, I really, really like Mamori. Good job with her.

I really love this story. :D
Sundae Bunny
2009-11-20 . chapter 27
This story is so good. I now officialy consider L/Misa a pairing, which is something I previously refused to do. I love how in your story, Misa gets a chance to learn that L's not a bad-guy, just another sort of hero. PLEASE update soon. Leaving it on a cliffy too long is just cruel...
xAngelic
2009-11-20 . chapter 4
I liked the opening. And re-reading this jogs my memory of the anime :3 Well, that's a bit of a given. I really like Misa, she's just that cheerful/'dumb' girl in the anime. And L was a big surpsise. :O (this was short)
xAngelic
2009-11-20 . chapter 3
So sweet. Misa really does have it hard. But she never shows it. And isn't L nice, buying a cake and eating it for her >_> The reason he hasn't called is becuase of the appearance of Kira...? Her stalker has died, but when will her parents' killer?? =_= must read~
xAngelic
2009-11-20 . chapter 2
This was cute... and shows a different side of Misa, not just the 'annoying' side everyone else sees. And the ending was very funny~ X3 I don't eat cake either, sadly. I'm a pretty picky eater, and having fruit within a soft cake doesn't seem to make much sense to me. Well, fruit for example. Chewy/hardish fruit with soft cake... >_> Meh~ When will Misa meet Light?... and will she be in love with him as well...? >_> It'd make sense, since what she just said. She'd rather him dead.
xAngelic
2009-11-20 . chapter 1
This was so well writtena dn just awesome!! And I guess that's why you have over 1500!! I've never ever seen over 400 reviews... wow. MisaxL is cute, and the 'hug' in this chapter was like an awkward strt XD I usually write more, but I want to read o.o
Hiei's Cute Girl
2009-11-15 . chapter 27
I can imagine him coming in with his rightious anger. I think Misa would feel worse if L didn't rush in to see her and get angry at her for her escapade.

She should see the difference in her heroes now. One keeps trying to force her, put her in danger. The other is continuously protecting her, pushing her out of harms way. I wonder when she'll see that taking lives for herself is never a good thing. It just brings you down to the criminal's level.

If you want to punish, let them live. That way, they can suffer through life, whether they regret what they did or not.
Marin the Sailor
2009-11-11 . chapter 27
This chapter was very cute in an odd way. L was definately adorable trying to protect Misa to the point where he about lost it when she refused to continue being "protected" by those badyguards. I think I even detected a hint of jealousy from him. The scene where L indroduced himself as Misa's boyfriend to his sister was hilarious. I could imagine her expression when he told her that. I can't wait to see what more will happen and what Misa plans to do next.
God of Static
2009-11-09 . chapter 27
That was good. But really, it's hard as heck to picture L yelling like that. I think some more details about that would be make this chapter better.

Seeing both L and Kira as right was a good take for this. Good work.
PersonalLegend
2009-11-09 . chapter 27
L was very cute in this chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Kelly
2009-11-09 . chapter 27
Ah! Cliffhanger of doom!

Very well done when it comes to L being upset.
Falon ^^!!
2009-11-07 . chapter 27
Hi again jiji ñ_ñ!!
Please put that L is jealous.
Misa-san realizes that L accepts that gave jealousy jijiji!¡! and so will find that love Misa-san jajaja
^^! xD
would be a good option, well put whatever you want my mind is flying again jejej^^!! but considers the idea please T_T!!

Kisses and hugs!XOXO ^_^

Update soon I'm dying U_U!! jejeje I'm Kidding ^_^!!
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