 Smileyone1 2009-10-29 . chapter 6Yay, more Brago stories that are funny and still in character! Whoopi! I really loved the first one, espiecially ebcasue of you narrating and the charactrs being able to her it! It's really funny, I hope you update soon! (gives Rahkshi500 puppy eyes) Please? Pretty please with sugar on top? You're writing is fantastic! |
 Death Angel's Shadow 2 2007-08-08 . chapter 6Nice! I like the sequel! Poor Zeno! T.T I wonder what's going to happen if Zeno and Zatch meet... |
 RevivedSin 2006-12-27 . chapter 6...
A forest?
Huh... Interesting. |
 Twilight Memories 2006-12-27 . chapter 6|D Zippity do dah, huh? How random! XD
Yes, 'tis after Christmas, and i've still been obsessively playing my .hack//G.U. game. *_* Ah, the awesomeness...~
*blinks* Oh, right, getting distracted...
Hmm, well, i wonder how you're going to wrap all this up. Hope to see an update soon. :3 |
 Rabukurafuto 2006-12-27 . chapter 6That was a satisfactory chapter. The mysteries just keep piling up! I eagerly await more. |
 RevivedSin 2006-12-06 . chapter 5GASH'S PARENT'S ARE HERE!
DUN DUN DUUN!
Okay, good job and keep up the good work. |
 Rabukurafuto 2006-12-06 . chapter 5That was a nice, long chapter. Plenty of information to satisfy me for now. Good work, and please update soon! |
 Twilight Memories 2006-12-06 . chapter 5:D New chapter alert! Nyeheh. Well, at least Gash, Kiyomaro, and Brago's screaming with another has stopped. ^^;
Good chapter, though all i really have to say is that there are a lot of grammar errors. D: All it really is though, is not putting in past-tense form for stuff that's already happened, like here:
/The dark mamodo sigh but followed the humans anyway./
Needs to be 'sighed'. There were situations like that quite a bit through the chapter while others were just fine, so i would reccommend going through your work. :3 Just want to see you do better. :D
Anyway... GAH, cliffy. (pout) Update? xD |
 Twilight Memories 2006-11-24 . chapter 4Heheheheheh... I like the hotdog scene best. :3 I can so picture it in my mind. xDD
But... GR... stupid email's not working still, Rahk! T_T WHY DOES FFNET TORTURE US SO??!
(sniffle) Anywho... Sorry for a short review... i just got up... ;-; Still a good chapter! ^_^ |
 Hajime Morikawa 2006-11-24 . chapter 4Oh dear... something tells me Zeno's going to sabotage the sausage; probably poisoning Dufort or something.
And how on earth is that sled even going to get off the ground with all that cannons...? Meh, if a sled can support Santa... |
 Flurry Fire 2006-11-24 . chapter 4Awesome chappy Rahkshi :)
I don't have much to say... early morning *yawns* well, ttyl amigoe... |
 Rabukurafuto 2006-11-24 . chapter 4That was alright, I suppose. Don't force yourself to wirte if you haven't thought of what should happen next. |
 RevivedSin 2006-11-17 . chapter 3I grant thee ice! BLIZZAGA! *completely freezes the author*
Ok... FIRAGA! *melts all ice except that on the author's forehead*
Whee!
Something very very similar to what ahppened last year.
But good job Rahk! |
 Twilight Memories 2006-11-17 . chapter 3NYEHEHEHEH, I KNEW IT! 8D Koko lives in the Mamodoville! x3 Well, now i have an idea what'll happen... Eventually, if ever. But anywho... YES, MARBLES! ^_^ I say they're weapons, nyeheh.
I love how you have Dufaux act in this story, it's really funny! XD Gotta feel sorry for him, his hotdog machine got sold~ x3
And i'm so glad it's the weekend. *_* Today seemed to go by really slow~
Anywho, i'll be off! Update whenever ya can! ^-^ |
 Flurry Fire 2006-11-17 . chapter 3Another nice chappy Rahkshi, and here's some ice for your forehead *gives Rahkshi an ice pack.*
Ember: Update whenever you can! :) |