It's a sad fact of life, but not everyone gets a happily ever after.

Excellent writing. Sounds like Josh has his independent woman. It's just not in the way he expected. Looking forward to seeing you develop these characters.

Very nice... I like seeing a bit of character building with some of the minor players. I like where you have progressed the two. I always liked Tara in the series, she always had that 'innocent' feel about her. I am liking how she is finally starting to grow up. Josh however, doesn't seem to be moving at the same pace. I can't wait to see where you take the story next...

Josh looking back to the past can not be a good sign. This should create interesting situations in the lives of all concerned.

Excellent premise. Well done writing. Technically good. I love this kind of stuff.

I'm glad you decided to write this little side tale to your main plotline. Not that I like to see people in pain but its interesting to see how you have a person that is normally so happy and carefree deal with such an upset.
Thanks for the great read!

Another Great story and to tell you I never like Josh in the first place.

Calamite