*shudders*

“Espeon” was a terrific story, and I liked this “director’s cut” style sequel. You really dug into the personalities and feelings of the executed Pokemon of Angelhaven, proving how the creatures had emotions. My personal favorite story was Charizard’s (aka Fireflight BTW: I like the clever nicknames you created for the Pokemon). I also I have to say I was intrigued by how all the victimized Pokemon call out to legendary Pokemon before dying. It adds a sense of “religion” to the Pokemon, which is ironic considering Angelhaven was loaded with ‘human’ religious fanatics.

I’ll admit; I do wish there was more of a fluent “story” behind this, rather than resembling a series of “deleted scenes” from the prequel. This installment might have flowed a bit better if the execution scenes were strung together more coherently. Better yet, it might have been even better if you re-incorporated these scenes back into the original “Espeon.” But nonetheless, I did like this sequel, and it provided more profound insight into the complexities revolving around “Espeon.”

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Poor, poor, pokemon. I guess Espeon fulfilled their curses. Why do we have such cruel, twisted, people in todays modern, relaxed society? It is a question that I may never have the answer to. Good work.-spiritwolf101-

im seriously crying because of this story!i luved it like your other bye for now

very sad but it explains who the pokemon are.

Farla, I LOVE these stories. They're so powerful and I can't even begin to explain it. I litteraly could read them for hours. And I love how every pokemon called for a curse...and I guess Silverfire was that curse.
Brilliant.

That is scary .

I just had an evil thought...I know the people of*Cough"Angelhaven*Cough are dead but they should feel really sorry for themselves and slowly suffer until they eventually commit deserve *Gets dragged away
I'm finished being evil now,you can stop staring!

OH MAN this is very very worse than the oringinal story i read this is starting to be very disturbing and horrible.

Holy crap! Jeez, how do you review that? Just, just keep writing. Anything by you, heck, I'll read it.

I can feel it. Grief, pain, anger, hatred, the need for vengence presses down upon them all. Man, I hope to the Holy Moltres they get it!

The Pokemon are PISSED. That's it, I wanna bloody Pokemon revolution and I want one NOW! BWAHAHAHAAAAAAA!

A wonderfully creepy prequel to a wonderfully creepy story. Well done.

That was good, is there gonna be a chapter 2 to Angelhaven Deaths? Please say yes! Those were good, sad, aye, but good! *Misummer Eve*