I hate to do this lol

“I don’t know kids remember.” “ doesn't make sense

just trying to help lol

not to make spelling corrections but “Don’t you want me her(e) liking it though, just some pointers

just a quick correction I take it you two become found ( should be Fond) of Colby?”

Oh I love happy ends! Post another story, please? ... pretty please?

this whole story was really good..i'm not a fan of jo liking dean which she obviously does..so having this whole love triangle and have dean and colby be together is better..i liked the ending too..good jo b

Great chapters 3-5! I hope you continue with this as soon as you get the chance! Thanks so much, zeusfluff

MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE!

More! More! More! Please. )

I just started reading your story and i gotta say that I am hooked! Please update soon! I must know what happens!

-Alyssa-

I like keep going.

I finally had time to read this and HAHA I love jealous Jo! She's not getting Dean no matter what cause he's REALLY liking Colby! *evil smirk* Look forward to the next update.

More please this is really good

the story is great. Though i like Jo, too bad u dont feel the same way

I love this story! Please do continue! Thanks so much for sharing! zeusfluff

Good start! I'm definitely interested in where this one is going! Will Jo go after Sam to hurt Dean? Love the Sam in trouble/ Dean to the rescue angst stories...or...will she go after Colby because of jealousy? or Dean himself? Had to laugh at the age comment..Jo really does seem a lot younger than Dean.

Looking forward to the next chapter!