I just re-read this splendid story. I'm in awe. There isn't a false note in it. Pacing and characterization are superb. Technical details are convincing. It's a full novel, written as fan fiction. Transitions between scenes are seamless. It's very suspenseful. The plot has enough twists to force the reader to pay attention. Locations are well realized, especially the area around San Diego. Thank you.

Beautifully written, consistently suspenseful, well-characterized, with characters speaking in distinctive voices. Great stuff!

Wow, this was pretty good! Glad I stumbled upon this little jewel whilst browsing through the Airwolf section. Thanks for the great read. The part where String makes all those suits hit the floor in Archangel's office was my favorite.

Wow, that was terrific. Well worth waiting for. Tight beginning, exciting middle, satisfying finish. Very happy to see someone continue to honor this show with wonderful stories. Good job!

I'm so glad you finished this. It's one of my favourite Airwolf stories. You've done a really good job with all the characters. In the show, Marella always seemed so intelligent and capable; since Michael was her boss, one assumed that he was also supposed to be intelligent and capable, yet he rarely did anything to prove it, especially after the first season. In this story, along with the others you've written, they make a much more well-balanced, plausible pair. And I love the way you write Hawke. Also, the technical details add a lot of authenticity to the story. But poor Michael; his life insurance premiums must be skyrocketing...

I know I'm being greedy here, but is there a chance of any more Airwolf stories?

Great to see this finished. Keep writing!

Sounds like String needs to find another pace to hide Airwolf! Great plan. Fantastic story!

Not good! And Laura could simply be allowing a senior officer to sleep while a junior officer does the necessary stuff that is required. Many a Staff Officer, Sgt, et all has done the same.

Well it's not like Hawke hasn't been in a hospital bed or two in his life. Nicely written. I don't get the ting with the General though. Is it just a senior officer or something more?

Ack! What game is Zeus playing? Or is he? Who is doing what to whom? Ack!

Really great story!

Oh my goodness! Archangel! Poor Karen! Bad bogus Airwolf! Bad!

Great story!

It really is a good run for Airwolf. Wonderful story!

Way to go, Archangel! Intelligence is just as important as Operations. :)

But that info actually says something, folks! Great story here! Well done!

No! Never say Marella is a plant! No!

Hmm Smart Archangel! Third device is either on one of the three or on the helicopter or in The Lair itself!