i give you permission to torture people again...lolz... i loved it, it was really well written.

aw. loved Jayne's aggressive pursuing...looks at my man from the corner of my eye...some men should stop being so passive...

Great work. i really enjoyed it :D

Oh my gosh! I'm squealing with ... giddyness(?) down in my room here! That was a great ending! And you can too write damn good romance/fluff **! Wow, and I can totaly relate to that wierd nausea feeling of her's. After my first kiss I wen't to the bathroom because I seriously thought I was going to thow up. Anyway, you are going on my fav authors list and I am going to bed! Nigh-nigh! ^o^!

poor simon...
lol
great job!

Insainly fluffy... But I read it anyway...

I thought these series of one-shot were absolutely brilliant, really enjoyed them, the build-up from beginning to end had me on the edge of seat when reading them, thanks for writing them.

This ending was just so perfect. It's so Jayne. I mean seriously, that's exactly what I see him doing if he couldn't seem to find the right words. And it makes for such a cute ending.

I've spent a couple days reading through this whole series, and it's a lot of fun. I like the levity with which you write the characters. They're all so very in character in their own ways: Mal butting in when he wasn't wanted, Simon sticking his foot so far down this throat he couldn't breathe, Jayne tough enough to get himself killed but scared to talk to a pint sized girl. And River, always trying to live her own life though her brother keeps getting in the way. It's very teenage angst while fitting in with the adult tone of the show. All good. Much love. And again, this ending rocked my socks. Thanks for writing it. O:)

I thought you wrote the romance/fluff stuff very well. I loved this little series. And it wasn't all fluffy. And you have to admit it was fun torturing them in slightly different ways. But, if you want to, feel free to torture them as you're used to. I'm looking forward to it. Again, much with the awesomeness.