 yumeniai 2009-11-17 . chapter 17Though u said u wouldn't abandon fics, this one's been dormant for more than a year ... if ur still interested in it, please at least post the written chapters u mentioned in the AN? This story's really good, with great character development ... I love ur Malfoy OCs, Casper's death was really sad ... will Tom do something to albaxas (or whatever the name is ... i can't pronounce it, therefore, i can't write it, haha ...)
Huge fan of this fic, please update something on it? |
 Lord Sia 2009-11-17 . chapter 17An interesting take. I like it. Especially since you have the constant suspense, Tom teetering on the brink of becoming Voldemort, but at the same time, shaping circumstances so that his opinions are substantially different from the "Pureblood Supremacy" ideal. Also brilliant how you describe him as both intelligent and cunning - this is the sort of image that convinces me that Horcruxes drive you insane - go figure, what with tearing your soul apart. |
 Dragonesse 2009-10-20 . chapter 17Very good story! Nicely written, good grammar, quite a good read. Please keep it up! |
 lipasnape 2009-10-13 . chapter 17Very good beginning of a sadly unfinished story. |
 lipasnape 2009-10-13 . chapter 15Can't say I didn't fear this happening. Now I wonder if you plan to follow the Riddle story more or less the same as if Merope died in childbirth. |
 lipasnape 2009-10-13 . chapter 13Uh huh. Well done. I am all worried now. |
 lipasnape 2009-10-13 . chapter 11Excellent. Memorable. |
 lipasnape 2009-10-13 . chapter 10My interest in the story and respect for you grows with every paragraph. |
 lipasnape 2009-10-12 . chapter 5Touching and hopeful for Tom. |
 lipasnape 2009-10-12 . chapter 4Well done, indeed. Poor Merope, unable to be honest to herself, too weak for the world, not to mention such a son. |
 Thurid the Invader 2009-10-05 . chapter 17this story is awesome and I can't figure anything else to say! I love it please update soon :D |
 dundee998 2009-09-13 . chapter 17Quite an enjoyable story! I love how human you've made him, which was of course your entire point. I can just imagine the other Dumbledore twinkling himself to death at the sight of an innocently mischievous Tommy. A pity you didn't continue on this, but what is there is still very high quality. I must look into your other work. Thank you for sharing! |
 Arekanderu 2009-09-06 . chapter 17This is such a great story. I do hope you update soon :) |
 Shadowface 2009-09-01 . chapter 17Very awesome. I don't know if i've seen anything quite like this before. Update soon! |
 evelsaint93 2009-08-28 . chapter 17Loving it. Do more! |