This looks like its going to be a good story...I really hope you come back to this story...I definatly want to read more!

Excellent beginning! Please, please, please Update it soon!

you can't leave it like that! its a brilliant start!

WOW I LIKE PRETTY PLEASE CONTINUE I NEED MORE PLEASE PLEASE

THERESA

*Jumps up and down with excitment* Please finish this story! I so want to know whats gonna happen! Pretty Please with suger and cherries on top!

UPDATE NOW!

Very well done. I can't wait 'til you update.

OMG
RYAN
I'LL SAVE YOU
IM A TRAINED PARANORMAL INVESTIGATOR
NOT THE FAKE ONES THAT SCREAM WHEN A PAPER FALLS
WE GO TO DEBUNK CASES
{EVIL LAUGH}
WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT
RYAN I WILL BE RIGHT BACK


UPDATE SOON
PLEASE

T_T please update! pleaseohpleaseohpleaseohpleaseohplease!

No! Are you gonna finish the rest? I read two of your other stories, and they're so awesome, so I'm reading this, but there's only one chapter, and I have to know what happens! Bie! :0D

I really love this story. Please make sure that Ryan does not die. I would really hate that. He is one of my favorite characters.

This is a really good start to a story. I can't wait for the rest! I hope you update soon!

this is good, you should update it!

I like the story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Love your work (but could you possibly come up with a more creative title?)! Please update soon. An update for the story where Ryan's stuck in a freezer (sorry\, can't remember the name right now), would be great as well.