Reviews for Their Own Devices

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gretchless 2007-03-21 ch 13,	abusehey, i have finally finshed all your stories ... i may skim throught darkfalling again to make sure i didnt miss again thing as i was readin the other stories at the same time. did you say you werent gonna be writing for a while ?? coz if so i think i am gonna have to find something else to keep me occupied will i wait for your next fanfic, keeping my mind of the cliffy you left in darkfalling ... okay will keep looking for updates and will talk to ya soon bye for now !!
rozzy07 2006-12-07 ch 13,	abusePapa Winchester truly came into his own this chapter. Staggering back to the hospital beaten up to hell hurting externally from the battering but internally with the fear that his son might hate him... wonderful put across the pain hunting has cost him and his family and the burden of guilt that resides within him at making his boys live that life. There was so much I could pick out on commenton but this one line summed up John perfectly for me: >John shook his head, the tears wanting to come again. He didn’t care if Jim saw him cry, it was a natural thing and if anyone could understand the need for tearful release it was this man who’d become not just his friend, but virtually his own conscience.> LOL when he realised just how bad he looked, and then you gave him that moment alone, much needed, with Dean and a feeling that if they could laugh together at their catalogue of hurts then they were well on the road to true healing. Still girl, you killed me with the ending. Sandy! After the promise that she would be saved, live a normal life, she goes ahead and does that only to fall to something 'natural'. Bittersweet moment with the boys at her graveside which I confess I had not seen coming at all...!! So Sifi, you know how much I've loved this story from start to finish (sigh..) - it was one hell of a read, visually graphic so that the violence exploded into the mind whilst being so emotionally charged that the buzzing sang across the page. Now I am expecting more from you pen soon. Please!
brighette 2006-12-06 ch 13,	abuseWhat, I somehow missed the exciting conclusion to our tale? Bad, Brig, bad! Don't worry, I smacked my hand, and hard! Yay, Daddy/Dean moments...sniffle. I like your John, hard yet that glittering heart of gold somewhere deep down. Got anything more up your sleeve?
lauren 2006-12-06 ch 13, anon.	abuseWow, you're story is really good...so touching.
Nana56 2006-12-05 ch 13,	abuseWhat a gut-wrenching story! I read it all today and am worn out. Those poor brave children...and pissed off daddy bear John! I love him! Really, really good story. I look forward to your next one.
MaceyAnne 2006-12-05 ch 13,	abuseGreat chapter! I liked the ending, that was a nice touch to put it back to the present! I really liked your representation of John, I think you got him just right, getting to the under current of his emotions that we didn't get to see too much of in the show til the end! (Oh, now I've made myself sad think about and missing John sigh) Back to you though, I really enjoyed this fic, it had everything I love, action, angst, plenty of Dean whumping, protective Sammy and Weechesters, oh yeah and a great representation of John. Thanks for sharing it with us, can't wait for your next fic! Hm, I wonder what that one will bring!
creeper 2006-12-04 ch 13, anon.	abuseI liked it, it was a little sad but I still liked it. Nice Job!!
Thru Terry's Eyes 2006-12-04 ch 13,	abuseThere's nothing to hate about knowing when the natural ending of a story has come. Bravo. Loved it. Yea.
rozzy07 2006-12-04 ch 12,	abuseSifi, what a visual explosion of violence played out under the too honed finggers or our John Winchester, superhero extraordinaire you've exposed me to here. JW bested a family of fugglees, so that even as the biggest baddy finally dies his last lingering thoughts is this: >You’re just a man…I should have been able to snap you in half…> Moral of this chapter: Never ever underestimate a Winchester! Ever. As for Jim, his sensitive soul sees so much, the hurt and damage done to boys and their ability to repair each other. But Dean honey, catheter removal whilst inflated just causes major major hurts!! Lord, my eyes over watered for the boy on reading this. Ouch. Short chapter maybe, but as always deliciously rich in detail and drama leaving my more than well fed. Roz.
CatBeist 2006-12-04 ch 13,	abuseHey, that was a really really good ending to it... I mean... it was just really... a perfect ending... Though you did make me think... I was going... hey didn't Sandy live, and the she died... Kinda missed the whole 2006 thing for a second there... but I got it... and when I did it was even better... And I really could ramble on but honestly... Sweedish TV is aring Bloody Mary right now so I'll sit down with that... COL And "simply the best" would really fit as a comment to the ending here :) Great job... I really should learn more describing words... lol :) Hope you had a good day filled with many good reviews... and a god day just in general too :)
Joslin 2006-12-04 ch 13, anon.	abuseGREAT STORY!!..i really enjoyed reading it, i love young dean and sam stories...Again amazing job...
L'insomnie des etoiles 2006-12-04 ch 13,	abuseWouah, that was ... Great, i see no other word. And the end...Beautiful! Thanks!
Dixie Dee 2006-12-04 ch 13, anon.	abusehey id just like to say i have been reading your story from the start and i think it was great! sorry i havent reviewed sooner i was really sure how to do it! Anyways I thought it was really good story and the ending was super tho i did have to read it again coz i got confused lol :D hope to read another one of your stories in the future!
historylover 2006-12-04 ch 13,	abuseAw... Sandy died. :( I was going "Um... what?" in the last scene. It took me a second reading to realize that the last scene had jumped in time to present day. How'd Sandy die? Did I miss that? Great story, though! Kat
sams1ra 2006-12-04 ch 13,	abuse"Ooh… looks like I’m goin’ for a ride… take me to my boys! Don’t worry boys… Daddy’s home!" ok, this is weird, but I read that, and I kept thinking of Buffy's 'fire bad, tree pretty'... lol I sort of liked seen John fall apart over this. Served him right.

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