well..i dunno, you broke the whole religion angle on us quite suddenly but overall i thought it was quite a good story

although, i would have liked to see more going on between K+R ph well

::A flash of blue light appears and we see Xeos
and his army of angels:: ::Xeos,"ahem"..."1,2,3"
All, "GREAT JOB KISHI"!::Xeos,"really
good job Kishi"...::appears thoughtful::"I
could congratuate to no end... not like I am.":)

Damn man that was an awesome story i was hanging on every word

Oh my! ^ ^ This calls for a more lengthy review.

Wow. I gotta say, you portrayed Aeka very well in this story. I am an Aeka fan ( character, not couple) and most people seem to think shes a stuck up princess priss ( as ryoukou likes to put it) , but im positive that the creator wasnt intentionally portraying her like that.

And Ryoko - talk about character development. I gotta admit though I was looking forward to her and Kyrin. Ahh but then again I am and always will be a T+R fan ^ ^.

And Tenchi seemed to grow a great deal as well. You completely made it look like the couplings were painfully obvious. But the only ones who did mention their feelings, didnt technically get the person they proclaimed their love to...

Err anyway beautiful. Well written, great characters, good job thumbs up. This fic makes me want to have a cookie. '

Oh one thing though...i have been restraining this ever since the first chapter.

Washu - English adaptation spelling
Wasyuu - japanese romaji spelling

hms washyuu - where in the name of kami did you get that spelling?
In the alphabet Shyu isnt a correct pernounciaton. Its Syu...if you say it correctly, it comes out at Shu - which is where Wa Shu comes from. The spelling - like mandarin is based off of the order of the sound that comes from your voice ( okies im getting into a japanese lesson that im sure you'd rather i not give) Lols ~ the joys of being a japanese girl who speaks three languages ~
Well other than the Wasyuu bit great fic. A best.
anyways Jya ne!
Ayumi*~ Setsunakutemo-hime

Sleep, my friend, you've deserved it.My vacation sucks, so I won't talk.
Ja Ne! *^.^*

Washyuu,you are so very correct.Blowing up stuff can be very amusing.I got suspended for blowing up firecrackers on school grounds, so I had to go to suspension school for a week. Even more amusing.^_~* Another great chapter,my blown-up man!heehee.TTFN!*^.^*

Hi!You've gotten alot of reviews from me before. It was at the email address julianniabc@aol.com.
Great work, as usual,but I've got a question.
What's with the insane teacher? I mean , I know teachers are completely nuts,but to murder a student? That's just wrong!Especially a good student who writes fanfiction to please others.
^_~* See you later!

Whoa, your story is SO well writen! I love it! I hope Tenchi likes Ryoko in this too! Then Kyrin would have some compition!

I don't know what to say. I really don't. There were a few paragraphs that were messed up, but I'm positive that was FF.net, and maybe a couple misspellings in the whole story.

Besides those minor things, this was the best TM! story I have ever read. And I've read several hundred.

ok kishi... i have to say it...
though youve heard it soo many times and still deny it. ITS AWSOME!
now to focus on "The Espyris Psyeski" there ive named it! and i will try to get chapt 10 done by monday... (quote "try")...

and so when are you gonna publish this?

**--**
*merc suddenly goes half cat and starts dancing with flashing multi-colored lights*
""I Was Right! it was Kenshin's Mother! MEOW!""
>^.^

Hi!Me again.I love how you mix the Lord in with this. Its a miracle just how you did it, but you did it and it's wonderful.

AmandaCullen
(Emily Blaire is a Penname.SH!)

Wow! I am completely awestruck by you abilities
to write a fan fiction as awesome as Jikoken'o Muyo! You are a wonderful writer and I hope that
someday we will meet.I'm only fifteen,but
you are probably my favorite writer.You have true talent.Don't ever lose it.
Amanda Cullen(Emily Blaire)

: somewhere on an empty stage there is the lonely sound of a small pair of hands coming together in applause. the view is quickly shifted to reveal a short, nondescript woman with skin as dark as Kyrin's and amused brown eyes:

It's been awhile since I've read this story. Seeing that there were some unfavorable gaps in my memory of it I just read the entire thing from start to finish.

On that note, bravo and brawo. This is not only one of the (very few) good tenchi muyo stories on this site, but I think you generally give all us writers in the anime section a good run for our money. I'm not a particulary religious person myself, but the fact that you included Him in this touches something deep inside of me. It's a good feeling, I like it ^^.

Thank you for sharing Kishi-sama.

Sorry I missed this when originally posted. Finishing a story is a good feeling, isn't it? Well done my friend, and I feel that the finale was duly appropriate. I wonder where a sequel would go? Anyway, thank you so much for finishing this story, it was a joy to read.

Dude,This story is da BOMB!
I love every aspect of it.You have
great writing potential!