I hope the next chapter comes out soon. Very interesting. :o)

Wow. Ryoko nice. Tenchi wooping some ass. Aeka trying to. Nice touches. I would offer some "constructive criticsim" but, unfortunaetly, I don't have any. This is a great story, and I really can't wait to see where this is going. Kyrin is a very good character, being torn between himself and Kain*crowd hisses and boos at mention of Kain*. All in all, a prevailing tale with an excess of potential.

I can't wait for more. Hurry soon please.

Lovely! I hadn't read a Tenchi fic in months, and this is absolutely what I was looking for today. I love how you made your character fit so well with the others. This has a great background also. Please hurry with the next part!

OMG! You HAVE to finish it! It is so cool! -Tarren