It's really beautiful!
But it's sad they both die in the end

omg omg OMG! i love this one it is so cute and emotional. you did a good job with this. poor naru. poor sasu. that is so sad! i do like all the emotional stuff in here tho...angsty...but very good.

wow, great job, exelent, sorry if i misspelled it.
it so sad, but when you read the words under the title you think that sasuke is going to kill himself, yet it turns out he is already dead, then naruto kill himself, so now their both dead, two more people for cole to see, (kid that could see dead people in the sixth sense) anyway, great, that story was great. sad, T_T, yet oh so satisfiying. bravo, bravo.

i dont mean 2 be mean but when u write a gay fic thats all i can be! i have nothing agianst gay, lesbo, and bi ppl but in naruto that is just nasty and discusting...u should work on some strait poems cuz ur really good...heres a couple of pairings for ya...naruto and hinata, sasuke and sakura, neji and tenten, and the not so popular 1... shikamaru and ino! sry im s mean but ur writing was pretty good!

lol XD

Woah... intense. I like it nice poem! Do a GarNaru story :) *SO HOT* I read your profile and found you have most of the same intrests I do! I totally agree with you on the Ginny thing... PErsonally I *hate* her. Also I have to put this in because I noticed that he was not one of your fav's or least fav's list. What do you think about Dumbledore in general? I hate how fake he can seem... I really don't understand why he didn't tell HArry about the prophecy earlier... MAybe then Siruis wouldn't have died *HE WILL BE BACK!* He just seems manipulative! OH Unexpected results of Time Travel is AMAZING and AWESOME! I just finshed reading oall of the chapters you have up (WHich is why I put HP stuff in a Naruto poem...) Aren't NAruto and Harry POtter just wonderful?

aw!that's soo sad!

God Damn, Woman!

Wow...that's intense...:O

Very powerful, makes me want to cry. :'|


Awesome oneshot, good job. :)

-sophie

that was brilliant. i read it over several times - very touching