*giggles* I have thought that a lot about Asch and Natalia.

Well written. Good read!

["I hate to interrupt this amusing scene," said Jade calmly, "but I believe the monster is right behind us."]
I love Jade. So, so much. Best mood killing line ever.

Absolutely lurrved this! The laughs it brought! Great job! It was such a fun read! :)

XD Hooray for Jade. -_-;; XD

Well done, like said before it really could have occured as a skit in the game.

About all this incest thing...well maybe you should be aware that North America is probably the only continent (well half continent) were marrying your cousin is considered real incest...actually this is very common in monarchies, since it's best to insure that the power is kept within the family.

Anyways good job on this one.

That cracked me up so hard; Jade pointing out the monster completely snuck up on me, though I really shouldn't have been surprised. XD Love your characterization, and this is totally the sort of thing I could totally picture as a skit in the game. Thanks so much for writing it!

Jade seems somewhat too calm when he announces the marsh monster. Whenever he'd seen it in the game, he was a lot more excited than that. Lol.

But then again, when words like "bedraggled" pop into fics, I have no choice but to award you extra credit.

That was enormously funny. Royal family incest LAMO! I liked the teasing from Anise as well. The ending was great.

Hhahhaha, this is hilarious!

I could just imagine this occuring as a skit!

I was wondering about that, too. When I first heard Natalia was engaged to Luke, I was like, "Ew! Luke's gonna marry his COUSIN!"

But then it turns out Natalia isn't really a noble, so it's all good.

. . . Luke hella belongs to Tear, anyway . . .

*ahem* please keep writing!

~*~Hikaru Irving~*~

I did wonder why Natalia and Luke were engaged if they were already related. xD Good topic, short, funny, good. I love your fics, do more.

...Now I'm REALLY glad Natalia isn't really from the royal family...I never really thought about it actually...Well, Natalia/Asch all around. Yay!

Lalala... (adds both TOTA stories to faves and you to faves)

I luv u... BUT NOT THAT WAY! EWW! EWW! EWW!

Very nice. Ah, noble incest... While that grosses me out quite a bit, you made it light and funny. Write more Abyss stories!

Well, that was something I overlooked, though I did hear people mention the incestious relationships with nobles in this game. Wow...funny how this fic seemed to make all that apparent, and yet keep it hiliarious at the same time.

^^ Nice.

We need more ToTA fics around here!

Guy's lying x) Simple as that... -snaps fingers- Damn me and my Guytalia ness >_>;

Awesome story once again Griffinkhan x)

Seriously, why can't they put a sign that says 'Beware of Behemoth' or something oO;

Any ways, -does thumbs up pose or something-

Continue on with the TOTA-ness and hopefully we'll get our section soon enough x)

OHO! I SEE A TALES OF THE ABYSS FIC!

Very cute and funny. :) I'm glad I wasn't the only one who realized the incest thing. :P