Absolute brilliance. Very IC for Toguro, without making him a complete meathead. He does have some sort of intelligence under there, even if it is covered up by rash impetuousness and lust for power.

I love this.

Especially this; “I do,” said Toguro. “But not enough.”

Brilliant, well-written, and very perceptive.

Hmm... I'd think the shadows would torment him on the way to limbo... Just my personal opinion though. I don't know a whole ton about religion... >.>

I like a good portrait of a mostly looked over character. I like a good characterization¨.
btw I'm looking for a beta reader of some sort. my grammar isn't perfect since english is my second language, and I usually need a very precise direction in order to correct mymistakes. Also you seem to be critical about OC's and seem to like crossovers. I would love to hear your opinion about a certain trilogy of mine.

Wow. This is the first time I've read a fic about this that centered Toguro instead of Genkai, and I must say I really liked it! ^_^

I think you did very well and he's IC.

I liked how you used such a simply object like sunglasses and make them so important. Cool story.