It's good, but it's just so... terribly confusing! And you said you were going to update 'soon'. Considering that it took a year and a half to add 6 chapters... How long is 'soon'?

The fic is great! But one thing that i've noticed is that, when you have the Liberi Fatali lyrics at the top, did you know that you left out the first and last lines? They are "Fithos Lusec Wecos Vinosec"(this is said 3 times) Then the last line is "Fithos Lusec Wecos Vinosec"(this is said 4 times)

Interesting, yes but i'm a liitle lost so please write other chapters quickly . ( p.s : i found a problem in the chapter 4).

hey, this is a cool story! please write more!! i really want to see what happens! thanks - keep up the good work!

good so far keep writing!

is the norway chick an exchange student? did hermione go to norway to be an exchange student?

WHAT THE BLOODY HELL IS GOING ON?! I'm so confused... I should have taken your word on that before... Yikes. Well, it's still a good story, but I'm gonna need some sort of really good explantion at the end, or I'm gonna be pretty messed up. So, yeah, I think you'd better keep writing, for all of the confused souls out there. =P

Crap! You are evil! Now I gotta wonder why she's pregnant, why Snape would like anybody, and where Hermione is (How do you say her name...?) for about twenty seconds before I read the next chapter. You are so cruel...

Coo~ool! This is a pretty original fic, and I'm getting worried about the Herms, so... HURRY UP WITH THE BLOODY NEXT CHAPTER ALREADY!! ahem. Ya gotta excuse me. One thing before I read the next chapter... You're a Final Fantasy player, ain't cha? I saw the title, and I'm hoping I'm right and not just some obsessed nut like my friend says I am... well, anyways, good story, keep it up, cause I'll be reading. Kudos.

write more!!!!!!!

yep this storys definetly very creepy. brillaintly written. i loved the beginning with the letters. it made it more personal. great job. write the next part soon plz!

awww a cliffhanger!!!! update update!!!!! augh!!!!! very nice-I really like the thing going on between bryn and snape;)

Alright. I'm creeped out, intrigued, and wondering when you'll add more to this story!! Right, so the mysterious Auror is either Wormtail or James, right? :) Sirius maybe? /Lily/? Somebody is alive. I'll bet it's James. Damn, that would be so cool... ennyhoo, this is neat. What does the Latin mean? I mean, I have a vague idea, but still... And criminy, is Hermione pregnant?? Where is the girl?! I'm keeping track of this one. Update! /please/!

This is a great story! Can't wait to see what happens next

Awwww, were is chapter three? That was soooooooo good! A+! What happens next! I wanna knoW! ~*~Midsummer Eve~*~