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Reviews for: Dense and Predictability
brasilgal
2009-11-03 . chapter 1
love it! ...shenanigan hehe...
Not Your Ordinary HP Fan
2008-10-21 . chapter 1
Oh! Loved it! What a perfect ending, it's fluffy without the fluff. Perfectly perfect! :) Thanks for writing!!
completely bonkers
2007-11-03 . chapter 1
That story was great!! Well.. anyway.. I just really need to know... are you a Filipino citizen?? ^^
Small finale
2007-09-29 . chapter 1
I loved the story, and in my head made up my own ending.

"Well," Lily murmured, glancing from the flower to James's blushing but obviously pleased face, "There's something I should do as well."

She got up and kissed him softly on the lips. James was taken by surprise, but once he registered what was happening, he deepened the kiss.

He could have sworn, however, that he heard her murmur "Thank God you're not a girl."
Sienna61
2006-11-19 . chapter 1
I love James :)
Great job!!
teenprocrastinator
2006-11-03 . chapter 1
awesome! omg, you have to continue it! and you cant make it an opne ending, people who do that are just plain mean, so please continue it!
hrypotrox72
2006-11-02 . chapter 1
awesome story
My Clone
2006-11-01 . chapter 1
I liked it a lot! Write more!
winnifred
2006-10-31 . chapter 1
AH! How could you end with that? lol jk. Kind of an abrupt ending. I don't think you should continue though so you can let the readers decide what happens next! :D
Wackysocks
2006-10-31 . chapter 1
Very nice, very nice. The only thing I would have done is have a better relationship between Lily and James. That way, Lily would be more open to him giving her roses. I liked it a lot, though! The ending was great!
Eve1980
2006-10-31 . chapter 1
nice!!
Super Cara
2006-10-30 . chapter 1
i cant believe you ended it there!! i say continue witht he story lol.

oh and in the beginning, i think you meant to say transfiguration instead of configuration
redglasses
2006-10-30 . chapter 1
Oh! I loved it! Very cute!! pitty though, that it stops... you could keep going? but it is a good as a oneshot! :D :)
Redglasses
Bri and Aly Inc.
2006-10-30 . chapter 1
aw. adorable. it's kinda cute; I usualy don't read one-shots (i like suspence and... well violence. and bickering... and possible the throwing of sharp or heavy items and certain charators heads) But this oneshot stuck me as sweet. good on you.

Aly
bananaslugg
2006-10-30 . chapter 1
hella cute

i really like it :)
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