haha, very good and funny.




had to laugh at this line "I started watching the Food Network when I’m off and Grissom isn’t""

I started watching Saturday Moring Kitchen when my other half was away, but thats as far as I go lol, well apart from cooking fish n'chips on a Friday, and I know that is not cooking but it is to me lol

Laughed my ** off at the ending! Fantastic. Great Sara voice.

Oh my gosh that is SO cute she'd go through all that trouble for him.

Reminds me of this time a few months back after my sister and I had moved halfway across the country. I was determined to make beef stew like my mom made it bc we both love it. Took me all day, literally. I had to call a few times back home but I did it. Took a sink full of pans to make it. My sister ended up callin and saying she was going out with her friends. I was so bummed but she came in the door not long after. She'd felt so bad she couldn't concentrate and came home.

I love this story and how it reminds me of things like that. And it's so funny how you want to make it just perfect and it ends up being 20x more work but it pays off.

I’m playing catch up after a busy week, and have only just read this. Loved it! Immense fun, and very sweet, in all sorts of ways. No way can I quote a favourite line; I just want to copy and paste the whole thing into this box! Indiscriminate praise perhaps, but praise nonetheless.

“Yeah…it was quite an experience.”
lol, loved how you united all the ideas! very well done ;)

Really cute story. Very entertaining.

Really like your story especially the Food Network and Alton Brown references. I love carmel candy apples myself. Can't wait to have one. Looking forward to your next story.

Hooray for a fic about my favorite holiday. An even bigger hooray for a fic about making candy apples which my Mother made for the first time last night and I ended up having to pry them off the sheet and wrap them after she gave up. Thanks for the adorable story and a good laugh!

Bwahaha! Effing brilliant story!

Big love!
~taramis

Have I told you lately how much I enjoy reading your work? You have a real gift for providing interesting backstory tidbits from Grissom's past even in stories from Sara's POV and I admire that.

This is so sweet and cute! I love the way you wrote Sara's thoughts!

Great! Just great! I laughed so hard because I can totally see Sara pouting at her lack of cooking skills.

That's great! I loved the always capable Sidle getting completely destroyed by some spun polyester and spray adhedhesive. LOL And I thoroughly enjoyed the little O'Henry twist there at the end!

How much did I love this! It was way cute! Happy Hollowe'en!

You do such a wonderful job with Sara's thought processes! I love your work :)

I'm from Michigan (with a plethora of cider mills) and up here its all about the carmel apples...

...I know we've never met but I'm takin a trip to the nearest cider mill specifically in your honor ;)

Keep on typin the good type!