a good idea about Nathan and Hagi. I agree with you : the older Chevalier helped him after the MET destruction.
to be continued ?

KEEP WRITING, I LOVE IT!

I'm definitely looking forward to enjoying little parts of Haji's travels!

And you really made me think about exactly what Nathan was. I was so surprised to see him in the end; but if he was a Chevalier...wow. Things start to make sense when I think about them that way.

a very intersting theory (on Nathan being an anciet chavieler(sp))

...and one that makes since considering his insight and appearance after his 'death'...

hmm, Nathan rescueing Haji? So much for the invincible Haji that survived a bomb. lol If you continue, I trust in you to make it Saya-Haji, koyuki-san. ^^

Really good start off.

I think you should follow up on another chapter, you've got a really good theory on how Haji could have survived since Nathan ,as we find out, wasn't Diva's Chevalier since Saya's blood didn't kill him.

I'm interested on how and if you'll continue the story.

Great beginning chapter! I like how you started off the Story!

I miss Diva and Saya!

Can't wait too read another chapter.

Uhmm nice, I always like your works. One or two pieces of grammer confused me but other than that all's good.

I also have this nagging suspicion that good ol Nate saved our beloved Hagi (make a bloody OVA ProductionIG!!)

This should be interesting if you continue with it, lots of (non yaoi) possibilities that you can play with. Looking forward to some more.