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Mari
2009-05-13 . chapter 1
Just stumbled over this story again, would be so great if you felt inspired to write another chapter…
Marcus Sylenus
2008-09-13 . chapter 1
Very good work, a well-written fic... i must admit that i'm a litte weary of the (too)many iterations of HG(and wished to slap some sense into Max more than one time), but this is really interesting. I hope to see you finish it someday, you've got a good grasp of the characters personalities & motivations, and the story flows along nicely.
Please, keep writing this, it's going very well.
Brian
2008-02-07 . chapter 7
I'm enjoying this story very much. I think that giving Logan amnesia is a very clever plot device to reexamine his relationship with Max.
RoseRed
2007-11-28 . chapter 7
Please come back and give us another chapter. I only started reading this today and I really like it.

Short little chapters would be fine.

Thanks for giving us this story.
JR Toguro
2007-10-31 . chapter 7
I'm really liking the whole memory loss story arc. I hope you update soon.

P.S. I really hope there is some M/L in the upcoming chapters.
intstebri
2007-03-28 . chapter 7
The first time Max said to Logan she was with Alex, it was a hurt. Now I had thinking, being immunized, It have to be more easy. But no! Please don't stop your story now, not like that. And please, advise if you think you will go on M/A way! Very good story.
0101010
2007-02-09 . chapter 7
What a terrific, interesting story. Very original conception. You've written the UST/angst really well, and infused the story with wonderful tension--and left me itching for more.

Well done!
0101010
2007-02-09 . chapter 6
o. That was unexpected. Poor poor L. What a blow.

Clever, wonderful writing though--well done!
0101010
2007-02-09 . chapter 5
Okay--wow! WOnderful chapter! Poor L-what a thing to have to re-live.

Very well-written--very believable (except for that whole virus thing, but that's not your fault--that was Fox/Cameron/Eglee's nutty idea!).

I'm really enjoying this and can't wait to read the rest!
0101010
2007-02-09 . chapter 1
Wow! This is great. I don't think I've come across a fic like this yet--it's totally engaging!

Can't wait to read more. Well done.
Maria656
2007-02-07 . chapter 7
for 5-7

this is good - can't wait till the death of the virus and the truth to be revealed.

Hope you are still going to work on this story
bastgoddess
2007-02-07 . chapter 7
a few undred words on max and logan realy not enough for me so pleeaasee hurry with the next chpt
Jeanetteg
2007-02-06 . chapter 7
I'm assuming that Mia is also trying to find a cure for Max. That's what she doing with that guy; am I right? If so can't you have her and him give Max the cure for the virus?

You said you don't think you can bring in, so why don't have someone else that Bling knows and trust about Eyes Only and will help Logan remember what he's lost and help him rediscover the exo...

And as far as Alec is concerned Logan can ask what's between Alec and Max, hesitantly Alec tell him that the virus caused Max to lie about her relationship with him. And Logan is satisfied with that and begins to remember they're relationship.

Just a thought.. :)
dgurisko2001
2007-02-05 . chapter 7
Another great chapter, like where things are headed so far and looking forward to more soon I hope.
jennyjen
2007-02-04 . chapter 7
I've been a bit slow in reading but that meant multiple chapters!! What a treat!

Your writing has me just as anxious as the show did. Please keep the chapters coming as I'm really enjoying this story.
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