this was really really good!
I got upset at the end.
That's amazing, i love it.
Even though its sad, It was really really awesome.
Well done!

Totally. Amazing.

So depressing, but so good. It didn't help that my playlist decided to play the Funeral March... Lol. Very well-written.

This was so sad! I wanted to cry my eyes out. (You write damn good AxelRiku.) This was so sad... so sad.

Damn. And I mean it, damn. It's just in a way so sad. It's not the kind of sad you'd cry about, it's a small, dull pain, a grey world. That kind of sad.

Riku's really not doing very well, poor guy. Roxas doesn't exist and Axel is dead.

I like the style of this. It's written very well and it gives slight hints - very slight - of Riku's state of mind and reality. The lines from the medicine bottle are a good addition. So yeah, I liked it, very much.

That was devastating! Poor, poor Riku. So tragic, and there was the horrible truth at the end! I wonder how Axel died... It's too bad. Great job putting together something seemingly innocent and crushing it at the end. Riku was pretty insane. Poor him. It was leading you on with all sort of questions and they were answered very quickly; it ended abruptly and unexpectedly. I loved the way you pulled it off.

This reminds me SO much of "A Beautiful Mind". It's always RIku thats skitzophrenic in Kingdom Hearts fics. How interesting.

Hard to read ( emotionally ), but a good read. Well written with just the right amount of secrecy until the last minute. Good job.

Wow, that was really unexpected. I was wondering what was going on and when I figured it out it was like, "BAM!!" That was really good though. I loved it. Write more Axel/Riku!

My favorite Axel/Riku story. The one that originally got me into it.
Magnificent. ^_^

Wanted to pull on my heartstrings? This ending really hits you on the back of the head...

I miss Axel =(

Holy shit, Riku's gone psycho! Aw, my poor Ri-Ri! :(

this story is one of the greatess ones ive read so far...it has great detail and a chilling but wonderful ending! keep up the goog work!

Oh my god... That was really, really good. I'm crying! Poor Riku...

oh...wow. woah. you...this...AMAZING. it made me shiver at the end. haunting, creepy, i loved it oh so much ♥

This was abolutely /amazing/. Seriously--it had me bawling at the end. Emotional tug, for sure. Beautiful writing, and perfect lead up to the ending.