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| Aryck1095 2008-08-12 ch 1, | abuseYou haven't been active on this site for a while. I hope you'll resume fan-fic writing soon, as I consider you one of the best authors on FanFiction. Do you think you could extend this story? I like the plot, and it would be interesting to see an Aang-Katara-Azula triangle. Plus, I'd like to see how Azula seduced Aang in the first place. It could make a good multi-chaptered story... |
| snowman794 2008-06-28 ch 1, | abuseits good, really good. only one suggestion, you set it a few years in the future or change the ages becuase sooner or later you'll get someone complaining about it. |
| Jack The Riddler 2008-02-12 ch 1, | abusenice, going in my c2 arcive, The Azula Fan Club. |
| Harlequin de Rustre 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseExcuse me, but, ah, please continue this. It's a great one-shot, but it can be added to. If you can't edit it or add to it anymore, continue it in a sequel. Eroticism is better when extended. Just look at my Diablo Fan Fic. Or my Avatar Fan Fic when I get it up. |
| Summer's Frost 2007-12-22 ch 1, | abusehahahahahahahah crackficalichuois did i spell that right you should be proud you created a monster. If you continued this you should have katara kill him or something sadisticly seductive lmao |
| The Knight Lord 2007-11-04 ch 1, | abusenice |
| hoyt 2007-09-23 ch 1, | abuseu do know hes 12 right? |
| Zeroasalimit 2007-07-30 ch 1, | abuseI find it sad that you can come on here and write that, and then admit to the general public that you have never been kissed. Anarchy for the Masses, Zero |
| whirleeq 2007-07-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is pure love... *sigh* You pulled off a very difficult ship very well. And I love that you have them both in character. Great job! |
| Itoshii Hito 2006-12-21 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was so hot! You had me licking my lips and everything. you really need to write a lot more stories about this pairing. Please, I really mean it. I'm not saying it like someone who's just saying this just to say it. I'm saying this as person-to-person, please write more. You're a really talented author, and you need more recognition. So please, for mine and other's sake, please write some more. |
| Hippocratic Oath 2006-11-19 ch 1, | abuse=/ i liked the story, but whats up with the title? dont get me wrong, i love the twilight zone, but you made no reference to it whatsoever in the fic. other than that, i liked it! i could NEVER see aang in an intimate relationship. and with azula, no less. and she seems more like the dominate one in the relationship. that makes sense. a good twist! i cant wait for an update. |
| Danette LaBrie 2006-11-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseI thought that was awesome. I like this pairing too. |
| bananasmash 2006-11-06 ch 1, | abuseCrack pairing, but I love it anyways. It has this strange...alluring feel to it. So I approve. Loved this fic! It was just...augh. One of those unexplainable things. Well, probably is explainable, but I suck at explaining so I won't even try. I personally loved Aang's innocent 'Hi...I missed you,' line. It just made me squeal. All in all, great one shot. Totally hot. Heh. |
| Kold Dusk 2006-11-02 ch 1, | abuseMy favorite Avatar couple; it's a creative story, I hope to read more from you. As for criticism, I don't think there's much I could tell you that you don't already know. Just keep writing please. Thank you for sharing your work. |
| Anime Destiny 2006-11-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseBeautiful fic you had written. This pairing is really odd, but I been reading good fics based on the pairing itself. |