Good job! I haven't found any language mistakes, but I could have miss them(I'm Polish). But... I could very easily imagine what you were showing. Roy asking "Trick or treat?"... and my favourite Roy paring^^

AW I LOVE IT
Over and Out
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*adds to C2*

Yo! ahnn...loved the fic *_* write more! ^^
See ya! XD~~ kisu

Happy Halloween! What did you go as? I was Inuyasha! Edward is next year! (Maybe)

Really really cute fic Riza-chan! I love it. You write the characters very well. Great job!

That was great! It was so sweet! I love Roy/Riza together.

I enjoyed this very much!

dude way to go keep it up !1

Very cute! I love it! ^^