loved it update soon

Well this was pretty good. update soon

This is the crazy obvious and boring way that everyone goes (and yet I like it EVERY TIME)! Have Derek get jealous when things heat up for a goodnight kiss between Casey and Evan. Maybe Casey likes Evan but she's not quite ready for the kissing scene with him on the first date, and Evan is being sweet and all, but he wants that kiss. Derek can come out and saves the day, also making himself a little obvious...yeah.

Then eventaully obviously Casey tries to be happy with Evan, but he turns out to be a jerk, and Derek and Casey end up together, and live happily ever after? (Or so the stories say...)

Just throwing it out there for you. ;)

Lava

lmao

aww i hope your creative steak comes back, cuz i love your story:D lol

anyways, an idea that i think would be cool, is you should make like..casey try to hard the whole date, and make a complete dork of herself, lol.

casey trying to hard and being a dork is always a good laugh.

Anyways, MUCH LOVE

can't wait for an update!

good enough story to wait for!

/Druccilla

ooh, this story seems really interesting! you always gotta love a good love triangle...especially when it involves Casey & Derek! I can't wait to find out what happens on Casey's date, UPDATE SOON!

Good, Good...Don't rush things...Derek would NEVER EVER EVER EVER be that nice...you need to give it time...oh and CASEY WOULD DIE before ever saying somthing like that to a girl on the phone infront of Derek suggesting that she sleep with him..(even if pretend)...srry...just some helpfullness...just slow things down...Derek is hard...he can't be broken...He rather die trying, than givein...

yay! Post more soon, this is an intersting story, but I'm guessing it's not a Daisey from the way things are panning out so far?

Lava

*waves hand in air* Pick Me Pick Me! O OO OO!

*points to druccilla*

"YES I AM EXCITED! PLEASE UPDATE!"

lol ... that was my entertaining way of saying, yay! i love the story, it's good, can't wait for the next update!

not sure what one i want her with yet...probably derek cuz he's such a cutie, but w/e, good good story, plz update soon!

druccilla-

Hey, Kyra again. Great chapter, it's cute. I think you're great at keeping the characters in character or making good excuses for why they aren't. (ie- so obvious Dasey but Derek covers it up like he really would). Good job!

yay! i love it! i wasn't so sure about this story in the 1st chapter, but now that i've read the second chapter, I AM SO EXCITED! please post S.T.A.S.A.P. (sooner than as soon as possible)

Cool. Great start. Catch ya on the flip side.

I think your story is cute. I prefer Dasey stories but this one is good regardless. Keep up the good work and update soon.

Hey! I'm Kyra, I figured I'd introduce myself because I'm going to be following this story and reviewing as much as I can. I like it, it's cute. My only concern is your punctuation, but it isn't terrible or anything. Actually, you write very well, unlike a lot of people who post work. Good job, keep it up.