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| zuclinator 2007-01-04 ch 3,  | abuseI've been reading your work over the past few days and I am really enjoying it. I would love you to complete this story. It has a very promising premise and strong, dead-on (pun intended), characterization. Thanks for writing |
| Khitie Ethrin 2006-11-30 ch 3, | abuseThis is getting interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter. *sits patiently and waits* |
| omg 2006-11-12 ch 3, anon. | abuseThis is well-written and interesting so far. I know you're busy with Beyond the Fear, but after you finish that, I hope you'll come back to this. |
| g8trgrrl 2006-11-04 ch 3, | abuseOh I love the idea of a dirty weekend coming up! Great start to a case too! |
| Ronata 2006-11-04 ch 3, | abusethanks for the awesome chapters, i think this case is gonna be very interesting and i love the whole Booth and Brennan stuff that is going on slowly. thanks! |
| BonesDBchippie 2006-11-03 ch 3, | abuseP~ TEMP the MIND MUCH WOMAN!? M, A dirty weekend in a luxury hotel with Mr. Tall-dark-and-Sexy! YEOWZAH![fanning face profusely!]. Interesting case too! I totally love how you always have them work so well together, even in banter they flow! GAWD, I just lov'd that last line of his "You ready to cause some disturbances?", and her just trying to clear her mind of the wicked thoughts of them in a dirty weekend! UGHH! AWESOME! I so can't wait for the NEXT chapter> L@@KING forward to it! YTB! ~G :D |
| avaleighfitzgerald 2006-11-03 ch 3, | abuseYou'll have to follow up that dirty weekend idea there! *nudge nudge, wink, wink...* Loved it as usual, really enjoying this story! Ava |
| willowwood 2006-11-03 ch 3, | abuseAnother fantastic chapter. Can't wait for the next up-date. |
| sheeiur22 2006-11-02 ch 3, | abuseThis is a great good story it is set up so well. |
| goldpiece 2006-11-02 ch 3, | abuseAlways a pleasure to see an update from you. I'm interested to see where the case is going. This one seems to be more case oriented than a lot of your pieces, so I'm really looking forward to an update. |
| immalee 2006-11-02 ch 3, | abuseGah, love your stories! Hugs |
| kate tidly 2006-11-02 ch 3, | abuseoh dirty wekend oh! I never really thought about the whole who slept in the bed before me thing before...lol good story so far though. You're developing the case in an interesting way but still getting that BB in there that everyone loves! Kate ~ |
| jaed621 2006-11-02 ch 3, | abuseA dirty weekend of sex with booth in a nice hotel...lordy woman you can prompt the imagination. I like the way you are writing them in this, she's gentle but thinking about him and open to the idea of him which I really like and she was big enough to sidestep the Cam issue and still think about being with him (and who wouldn't!), I also liked that he is the only person she thinks about being with in that way. You write them so they slowly open to oe another and then all this passion falls out, I love that. The hotel is a great setting and the possibilities here are endless there, I think it's interesting that she hates hotels but it makes so much sense, maybe he can change her mind...the case too is interesting, it's an odd place to hide a body and the odor question also crossed my mind. I thought the bit about how she felt like law enforcement when getting into the FBI vehicle was so good, so exactly her and so understandable, it was just one of those wonderful little insights that bring your work to life. Well done, I look forward to the next chapter, keep writing! Take care, Jaed xox |
| BonesDBchippie 2006-11-02 ch 2, | abuseP~ Well I hope the "gates of HELL" were kind to you! LOL! And Yeah, it does sorta make ya think "Just who the hell slept here before me"~~The older I get the more expensive I go! Not so sure that's the right attitude but it has a better way of diverting the obvious! LOL! GREAT chapter and HAPPY to see B & B! Got a chuckle out of the "who I'm sharing a bed with" conversation! LEAVE it to Booth to come up with that answer! Can't wait for the NEXT chapter L@@KING forward to MORE interesting info! ~G :D |
| BonesDBchippie 2006-11-02 ch 1, | abuseP~ YOU'RE BACK! YOU BUSY LITTLE BEE YOU! And you never told me that gruesome little detail!! YUCK! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE the attention to DESCRIPTIVES in this! THEY'RE so...VIVID! It L@@ks like it'll be a really good one! I'm onwards to chapter 2 NOW > > > > > > See you there!! MISS YOU!! :O ~G :D |