Too bad it was so short... it was so gentle, but deep, but I'd have to say it didn't have much of a plot if that was all. Too bad.

My first time reading an FLCL fic, and I love it.

Wow, that was very well written piece of work. Well Done!

I noticed that the rating of this story is M, but I don't see any inappropriate things in the story such as profane language or mature content in it. A "K" rating would fit perfectly here.

-Durante Alighieri

wow...this story was great

This was a very...interesting story. I must say, I really like the ending. it has a mellow feeling to it.

The storys first 4 chapters were exelent but the last 2 killed the plot that the first 4 had set. The ending took me by suprise, but it just didn't seem to go with the flow of it. good plot. bad ending

That was so beautiful and sad. It was completely flawless.

Why is it rated M? It doesn't have anything inappropriate! I don't think there was even swearing!

That was really GOOD! The only issue I have is:

1)Why is it rated M? There was nothing but K in this one.

The nickname "Ta-kun" comes from his and his older brother's name [TasukuTa and Naota-kunkun]Takun.

I knew it was going to be a good fic after reading part one.

This is one of the best FLCL fanfictions ever! It captured the characters in their truest form. You are a great writer! Hopefully, there will be a sequel.

Truly a masterpiece. \m/

Oh god, this… This story is… I don’t even think there’s even a word to describe how beautiful this story is. It... It almost made me cry, and I would have to, if I wasn’t a guy, that is. You know what I’m talking about, that whole macho crap. But still, even thought you haven’t been to this site in like, 2 years. I thought you should know, that your story, is and shall always, be one of the (if not THE one) best Romance FLCL fan fiction ever. So, I guess all I have left to say is... Sayonara, Kite kcc, you where one of the greats...

I was too lazy to sign in. :p So.. this is an Eri and Naota fic? One question..

Why was it rated R?

actually TV-boy is called Canti.

pretty good so far.