It has been a while since I have read this story. i had to start over again to remember where I was in it. I found the plot device you used with Tai and Kari very interesting. I hope you continue again.

what a mess. the warriors are having trouble, and lucimon is in tai's heat(sso to speek). great chapter.

Keep writing! I want to read more :D

I can't believe you actually updated this! I read this around a year ago, and I don't think it had been updated in a while. Imagine my surprise when it popped up on the "recently updated" page! "Somehow, you'll do something stupid and then we'll suddenly win. That's just how you work." LOL, sounds like the goggleheads.

Wow. That's all there is to say. Wow.
...OK fine, I'll give a more in-depth review, if I must! :P

I love the story so far - the way it's written, the storyline, etc. I especially love how well you've written the responses and emotions - it's all very in-character, which I really look for in a fanfic of any type. The writing style is brilliantly desctiptive in that it covers all that a reader needs to understand the plot but leaves just enough room to allow a reader's imagination to take over. This is one truly great Digimon story and it really would fit in as part of the Digimon seasons. While there were a couple of rough patches here and there and I personally didn't think the first-person style in chapter 7 fitted in this primarily third-person-narrative story, I have been hugely impressed with what I've read and really look forward to future chapters. :)

Minor note for chapter 7, though - where Matt tells Mimi to call 911... Well, in Japan, the emergency services are not 911 - it's 110 for police, and 119 for fire and ambulance... Just sayin'... ;)

Also, in chapter 9 - the line "The creepy voice range through Tai's mind link a gong" ...shouldn't it be 'rang' and 'like'...? Probably the only spelling errors in the entire story, though - which is rare on ! lol

Other than that - amazing stuff! Thanks for writing it and sharing it with us.

Awesome chapter! I absolutely love it and can't wait 'till the next update!

Yes, I must be dreaming, you updated! ZOMG! AH -runs into a wall to prove it- OWW! Nevermind! I'M NOT DREAMING! WOOT! -blushes- thanks for thanking me, that doesn't happen as much as it used to. I hope you give another great update soon!

-Martiny

Awesome story!

great chapter.

Wow, great story. I can't believe i haven't found this till now! Seriously looking up for the next update. P.S. If you don't mind, can you read my digimon story?

Thank you for updateing so much, I hve been waiting ages for this! I can't wait to see what happens next, hope its something sorta good. poor izzy, in the hospital.

-Martiny

Will you continue this? i hope so i loved it!

Things keep getting weirder and weirder...

i think the origenal 7 digidestened, as well as kari, and ken, should receive d-tecters that already have the spirits of the legendary warriors of courage(tai), friendship(matt), sencerity(mimi), love(sora), reliability(joe), knowlage(izzy), hope(tk), light(kari), and kindness(ken). please corect my spelling, if i spelled any thing rong. grate chapter. tell me what you think of my idea, ok? thanks.

wow, that tas the strangest thing, so far, in this story. happy enging? grate chapter.