This story is INSANELY AWESOME!
THE STORY ROCKS, YOU ROCK, YU YU HAKUSHO ROCKS!
PEACE OUT, PEOPLE OF FANFICTION!

Wow

That was fantastic from beginning to end, I love it!

The links on DA and on your profile weren't working right so I had to scroll down and click it. I'm glad I read it!

This is WiccanVampire92 from DA. I am off to read your other stories now!

Ahh, well this was just a bit too long for a single chapter you know? It makes the reader who has a short-attention span want to stop reading, so I'd advise for long, seperated chapters. :D Other than that, it's pretty good.

Pardon me while I go cry in the corner now. ;_;

Excellent story. Totally had me going. Touya/Jin fics aren't common, so it's awesome to see a brilliant one like this. And by brilliant I mean tearjerking.
Definitely a fav. ;_;

~ACV

Wow, over-all, this is mostly well written, with a great plot, and a great setting!

A few words sound a little out of place and akward, and many of your sentances tend to run on, but those are the only real flaws that I see. I really like how you portrayed Jin and Touya's relationship, the're not blushing and nervous at everything they say, the're not screwing every second of the story, and they don't seem shy or akward at all. I think you got their characters really well, and the plot is very good too. But I cannot stop gushing about the setting, I love it to pieces!

All in all, this is a great story, and I will be adding it to my favorite lists, and i'll be keeping an eye out for you as well. Keep up the great work!

Oh.My.Gosh. I am forever in shock that was amazing description,and plot, I never would have thought of a ending like that. Only problem in a way Touya wouold never have really have been like that weak and frail. His charachter is more anti-weakness and Jin well Jin you got perfectly. Over all, great job!

Hey, I like the plot and all, but there were a few things (pet peeves of mine) that just annoyed the crap out of me. 1: A lot of sentences didn't make too much sense, or were missing words. 2: Grammer. Those are the only things that I see that need improvement. However, despite those facts, I hope you'll be happy to know I saved this to my favorites. Good story, and just in time for spooks-ville holiday. In short terms, I like, but would enjoy seeing improvement. I hope you keep writing so that I might see that improvement...(Geez...Don't I sound like a teacher?) So I'll keep an eye out for you. Of course, it is kind of hard to write Jin and Touya fics...(Of course, that didn't stop me from writing one of my own...)But yeah, if you write more stories, I'll definately read them. Keep it up!