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SammysTeam 6/4/11 . chapter 17
So this is the third time in the last year or so that I've been back to read your stories. ;D I absolutely ADORE the way you write. I've never seen a better written Sam and Dean, I don't think. I seriously love the personalities you give them, and I don't know if you're still into Supernatural or not, but I just thought I'd stop by and let you know how awesomely talented you are. ;D
OutTonightAndForever 12/26/10 . chapter 17
great last chapter! i really like the way you ended this, all loose ends tied up neatly! great job!
OutTonightAndForever 12/25/10 . chapter 10
another review! the humor was great in this chapter but the angst was also great!
OutTonightAndForever 12/25/10 . chapter 9
wow a lot of angst in this chapter! loved the ending and the whole chapter!
OutTonightAndForever 12/25/10 . chapter 8
wow, james is crazy! great chapter! poor sam [
OutTonightAndForever 12/24/10 . chapter 5
wonderful story, can definitley see why it won the award in the 13 days of hurt sammy! yeah that last scene was worrying, hope the boys see that the priest is doing something soon! i loved the sam and dean scenes in this, it was all very in character and heart wrenching!
OutTonightAndForever 12/24/10 . chapter 4
wow this was a good chapter! though that priest really really pissed me off! can't wait to see what happens to sam!
OutTonightAndForever 12/23/10 . chapter 2
this was a great chapter! i can't wait to read the rest of it!
Kitrukia 8/16/10 . chapter 17
Wow! Great job! You had me tearing up at this last chapter with the brothers finally opening up with one another and facing some of their fears. I think this was a great story! You were really able to look deeper into their minds and come up with a very believable story. I know you wrote this a while ago, but, for what it's worth, I think it is awesome! Keep up the great work. Don't let that talent go to waste!

Katy
mel92 6/18/10 . chapter 17
really really good. seriously good. never once did i think the boys were out of character, and the things you went into... were really deep, it made me remember just how complex not only Sam and Dean's characters are, but also how complex the human mind can be.

There were some amazing scenes and descriptions that really stuck with me. One of my favourites was when Sam saw demon-him for the first time in the motel room, and Dean held him down, stopping him from freaking out. It was a deeply touching moment that seemed very real.

Another was the one where they're in the car and the windows exploded, and they had to fight the pastor guy. The grenade was a awesome surprise, and I totally loved it when Dean ran the guy over. XD

Of course the climax scene was just the best, with kick-ass Sammy, and the mega, titanic, chaotic asplosion of light and the clouds, man it was just so cool-! not to mention Sam going crazy and Dean's reaction of shouting at the sky for them to "give him back."

Anyway... yeah... it was good. xx

oh p.s. it'd never actually occured to me that the boys had learnt boxing and wrestling for their fighting skills. Hm, go figure.
arilaen 5/29/10 . chapter 17
WOW. That's all I can say. This story does the best job of dealing with the relationship between the brothers that I've ever read and probably ever will read. Your writing style is amazing, and this story read out like it could have been a long episode. Love the beginning horror scene that also screams "Supernatural!" and the banter between the brothers, and all of the smaller events like Sam trying to commit suicide and seeing his demonic self that fed into the larger plot. And LOVED when Sam went darkside! I'd love to see where the series might have gone if Sam did find a way to use his powers for good and being even more badass and not just, um, have it all lead to freeing Lucifer...

Anyway thanks for this amazing read!
PhoenixDragonDreamer 12/13/09 . chapter 17
YE GODS, how I have adored this fic! WOW! I...there are no words! I am as yet speechless from the Awesome!

*Smishes you in joy!*

Yes, yes this has quickly become a favorite and will be asved as such! Thank you - thank you so much for this fantastic fiction epic! Kudos, Brava and THANK YOU!

*Smishes again*

Mandy
Gohanzgirl 11/28/09 . chapter 17
You are absolutely amazing! I thought this fic was wonderful! I enjoyed reading every second of it!
Gabsmom 11/26/09 . chapter 17
I just finished reading this for the 3rd time! Each time is great! I see you haven't written anything for at least two years, sorry to see that. Both of your stories are wonderful and I hope that you will start to write again, soon!

Gabsmom
Ashley 10/27/09 . chapter 15
Aw, poor boys! I LOVE the confidence Sam has when he lets go and accepts the powers. All the stuff he says while fighting the demon, the arrogance and condescending manner..just beautiful..and kinda sexy. ;P I so wish this is how it would be in the show. ;D
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