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sea.of.stars.41
2009-02-20 . chapter 1
i find this story a very interesting perspective i hate peter so i hated his perspectiv enaturally it was well written though..:)
i like d sirius' becaus eit was descriptive and cool so yah definitely my favorite..

the last one remus...definitely very well written i liked how he was comparing the kids ot his friends... I always did wonder y remus wouldnt have been there but full moon explains it perfectly my guess thoguh is that voldemort wouldnt have been smart enough to plan for a full moon that owuld have been peter...one last thing and in no way should you be offended by this just my oppinion here everyone has theirs but I sorta doubt that remus would eb so upset about his friend's death that he would completely forget harry for that long...but its jsut an opinion so never mind
anyways great insight and perspective and nice writing keep up the god work

-live well, smile lots,and update often...what more can u do?
ThinkTooMuch
2008-02-16 . chapter 1
I like how Moony thought he was James for a while, cause he was still half asleep. Or he thought he was.
petites sorcieres
2007-08-21 . chapter 1
I know it's been a long time since you write this, bit I just wanted to rewieu becaue i love this one shot!! It's so weel written and describe exactly what they all have felt when they have seen little Harry. Sirius was in his dog form so he must jave been a little confused lol because Harry...Tall ? Nah. ^-^Yeah sure he is taller than when he was 15 moth but still ^-^
Seer of Spots
2006-02-12 . chapter 1
Another interesting one. I don't think I've ever read anything like this before, and trust me: I've read an awful lot of fanfiction. :D

Very good; interesting perspective. I like.
centaursh
2005-03-18 . chapter 1
Xcellent! write more! =)
Bouncebackability
2005-01-01 . chapter 1
Sorted. I like
arianna
2004-09-22 . chapter 1
that is really good! is it a one chapter thing or are u going on?
rockersbb13
2004-08-03 . chapter 1
wow... that was really good! remus' dreams were creepy but so well done... really it was all well done. one little quibble... this really wasnt the first time any of them saw harry, i'm sure they saw him when he was a baby and james and lily were still alive... but thats ok. i still really liked this!
a-dandy-lion
2004-07-12 . chapter 1
aw! hat was a really violent moony, but i loved this. it was really well written, and thought out, and gave me a good insight too!
Nuwie
2004-05-01 . chapter 1
That was a great and interesting idea ! I always wondered what Scabbers was thinking about sleeping in Harry's dorm... lol Honestly, the manner you describe those three's reactions is impressive !
Talamh
2004-04-10 . chapter 1
Brilliant. Pure genius. I have to admit that I'd never thought about how Peter would have reacted on the first train journey, but what you have described here is very believable and with a nice style to it. I'd also thought that Remus's reaction to seeing Harry again was always very unresponsive, if you get what I mean, but I like how you've basically just had him thinking he was dreaming or in shock. Very clever. Overall, a good piece that really made me stop and think about what it had been like for the Marauders during their years since James's death.
~Talamh
GlanceTonight
2003-10-11 . chapter 1
MM... Only 1 question: They saw Harry for the first time when he was a baby, did they not?
Templa Otmena
2003-07-10 . chapter 1
Templa Otmena again
I forgot to add that I loved the 'dream' conversation that young Sirius, James and Lily were having.
It is great foreshadowing for Remus and it makes the fact that he thinks that Sirius is guilty and that he deserves Azkaban all the more heartbreaking.
Templa Otmena
2003-07-10 . chapter 1
Brilliant and accurate as usual BrieflyDel!
Thanks again for another great story.
Pyrinsomniac
2003-04-19 . chapter 1
Aww...
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