 Loren 6/21/01 . chapter 3So, wenn Zells das FilmRichtlinie-halteseil, nicht er, soll herauf Tote schließlich beenden? Oder sterben jene Halteseile nur in den Folgen? OH-Vertiefung. Und ich nehme an, daß gebumst herauf schlechten Schuft Rinoa besser als gebumst herauf das Stören von Rinoa ist. Guter Job Alan Smithee! Ohne Sie als den Meister der verdrehten Stimmung, würde die Welt aufhören, zu existieren! Oder nicht..., |
 superviolist 6/21/01 . chapter 3 ...that evil, huh? Ah well, good parody. You always do know what to say. And I'm not being sarcastic. |
 superviolist 6/21/01 . chapter 2 I was going to just review the last chapter, but I figured you'd like this better. Leaving Zell in charge is always a bad idea. |
 superviolist 6/21/01 . chapter 1 Always an interesting read, Alan. I liked the Scooby Doo bit at the beginning. Ultimecia has a Scooby feel to her. |
 Marree 6/21/01 . chapter 3These are so short... its not like you...
Not bad though. I liked the analysis of the main character that Zell made o-o |
 Marree 6/21/01 . chapter 2This chapter wasn't as funny Alan. Still had redeeming qualities though. But how many times can you use Kai En Tai in a fanfic setting? |
 Marree 6/21/01 . chapter 1So Rinoa hunts down Squall... somehow I like that idea lol. Maybe do a Rinoa/Seifer pairing Alan. Cause a stir. o-o |
 Loren 6/20/01 . chapter 2Minions sont si dur pour trouver la majeure partie du temps. À la différence de la quantité de maisons gaies de bain dans San Franisco! Oh pourquoi, l'cOh pourquoi ne peut pas le nombre être identique? Dites-moi, Alan Smithee, pourquoi ne peut pas il être ainsi? Le bon travail Alan Smithee! Le monde dépend de votre âne! Ainsi vont, vont vont vont, et ne montrent à vos ennemis aucune crainte. Vous nous libérerez tous! Comme les poneys sauvages sur les plaines... |
 Loren 6/20/01 . chapter 1El drama apenas vierte hacia fuera, como una cascada del susurro sobre un campo de potros salvajes. La bruja hará un funcionamiento hermoso, y se dé rosas de mil ventiladores. Rinoa hará definitivamente un impacto, y el chubasco será sorprendido. Alan Smithee acometerá adentro hacia el extremo y entonces el theréd sea un partido! Buen trabajo Alan Smittee! Le amamos! |
 Maerah 6/19/01 . chapter 1... You have a lot of time on your hands, don't you Alan? |
 Sorceress Blade 6/19/01 . chapter 1keep going (i know where its leading) but keep going... |
 Lady Aliena 6/19/01 . chapter 1Ha ha. That was humorous. I thought it was funny how you mentioned how everyone thinks Rinoa's whiny & a ditz. And how Squall just blew her off at the end was cute. |
 eaglewing 6/19/01 . chapter 1Alan...I wish I could say this was funny, but it ain't. Better kuck next time. |
 Andromache 6/18/01 . chapter 1Sounds like another epic story has just commenced. |