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| Miss.Dizz 2007-12-09 ch 1,  | abuseVery cute story! I loved it, and both of them were very in character. Good job! |
| CaffineFreePepsi 2007-11-10 ch 1, | abuseit sounded to me like she was just trying to get him loosen up, or calm him down. Or annoy him. it was very cute, didn't see the whole wedding night thing coming. |
| Getso 2007-10-28 ch 1, | abuseThat ending was absolutly yes. I loved it. The whole story was written well and the ending was just brillant. It sumed it up nicely without being terribly lemon-y & explict. |
| avery18 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abuseI can totally see Tenten doing that on their wedding night. Weapons > all. :P Poor Neji. |
| Kane Shi Megami 2007-07-19 ch 1, | abuse*fans herself* Wow it just got a wee bit hot in here XD Love this, and your Tenten is great :) KSM |
| AmethystDreamer 2007-07-02 ch 1, | abusethat was soo funny and cute! |
| Aiko 2007-05-14 ch 1, anon. | abuselol! This was really good!! I was worried for a second, but it all ends well. ^_^ |
| OriginalBubble 2007-05-05 ch 1, | abusewhohoo! who doesnt get a naughty little smile when tenten and neji pop up on screen - they MAKE you think naughty! lol, loved the ending *wink wink nudge nudge* |
| sleepykittycat 2007-03-21 ch 1, | abusePerfect. Really and truly perfect. It's just so beautifully NejiTen lol. Very well written! Yay for the author! ^^ |
| Xanie 2007-03-15 ch 1, | abuseOhh. . .So much passion. . . Wahehe. . . |
| Aryanne 2007-02-18 ch 1, | abuseTenten is ridiculous in this, and that's what makes it funny. |
| Sunshine and Puppies 2007-01-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseInteresting take on Tenten. As there isn't a lot given about her in the manga yet it is always neat to see how people write her. You have a few puncuation errors and I believe you have a few grammer errors (I could be wrong and they could just be odd phrases). Get a beta that loves them some english or comb through the fic again and see what you get. Have a nice evening. Sunpies |
| AmBeR lOvEs HeR bOo 2006-12-19 ch 1, | abusete-he-he |
| everlasting memories 2006-11-19 ch 1, | abuseThat was quite brilliant. "Bed grappling" LMAO. Nicely written. I liked the one-shot very much! |
| scorpion05 2006-11-18 ch 1, | abusegosh this was so cute ^^ loved it! |