nice story, poor neji in the begining though. I think she planned it.

haha cute. I love it

This is such a funny and lighthearted story! Poor Neji, but evil Tenten! Haha, I loved how you built up his disappointed and her (maybe staged?) oblivion to that wonderful last sentence. I've probably read this fic about five times, but I always get the same amount of enjoyment!

Great job!

Very cute story! I loved it, and both of them were very in character. Good job!

it sounded to me like she was just trying to get him loosen up, or calm him down. Or annoy him.

it was very cute, didn't see the whole wedding night thing coming.

That ending was absolutly yes.
I loved it.
The whole story was written well and the ending was just brillant.
It sumed it up nicely without being terribly lemon-y & explict.

I can totally see Tenten doing that on their wedding night. Weapons > all. :P Poor Neji.

*fans herself* Wow it just got a wee bit hot in here XD Love this, and your Tenten is great :)

KSM

that was soo funny and cute!

lol! This was really good!! I was worried for a second, but it all ends well. ^_^

whohoo! who doesnt get a naughty little smile when tenten and neji pop up on screen - they MAKE you think naughty! lol, loved the ending *wink wink nudge nudge*

Perfect. Really and truly perfect. It's just so beautifully NejiTen lol. Very well written! Yay for the author! ^^

Ohh. . .So much passion. . . Wahehe. . .

Tenten is ridiculous in this, and that's what makes it funny.

Interesting take on Tenten. As there isn't a lot given about her in the manga yet it is always neat to see how people write her.

You have a few puncuation errors and I believe you have a few grammer errors (I could be wrong and they could just be odd phrases). Get a beta that loves them some english or comb through the fic again and see what you get.

Have a nice evening.

Sunpies