I can totally see Tenten doing that on their wedding night. Weapons all. :P Poor Neji.

*fans herself* Wow it just got a wee bit hot in here XD Love this, and your Tenten is great :)

KSM

that was soo funny and cute!

lol! This was really good! I was worried for a second, but it all ends well. _

whohoo! who doesnt get a naughty little smile when tenten and neji pop up on screen - they MAKE you think naughty! lol, loved the ending *wink wink nudge nudge*

Perfect. Really and truly perfect. It's just so beautifully NejiTen lol. Very well written! Yay for the author!

Ohh. . .So much passion. . . Wahehe. . .

Tenten is ridiculous in this, and that's what makes it funny.

Interesting take on Tenten. As there isn't a lot given about her in the manga yet it is always neat to see how people write her.

You have a few puncuation errors and I believe you have a few grammer errors (I could be wrong and they could just be odd phrases). Get a beta that loves them some english or comb through the fic again and see what you get.

Have a nice evening.

Sunpies

te-he-he

That was quite brilliant. "Bed grappling" LMAO. Nicely written. I liked the one-shot very much!

gosh this was so cute

loved it!

woot wot wot! Syaoranhime you rock!

WOW.

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very surprising but kawaii ne? -