Haha. Nice job with Fudge here. I am impressed!

Good job. I love how he is so calm.

Ah ... It's like the missing chapter of Prisoner of Azkaban ...

Ooh, very interesting.

a very interesting take on Sirius. no quill or pen. Never thought about that particualar problem. goes to my favs.

I'm writing something akin to this; some of Sirius' memories...

Nice work.

decent. Not your best, but it would seem that it's also your first, so whatever.

Interesting PoV and brilliantly described as well. _ Loved the last line - I'll bet not many people thought of that when they read PoA! _ Loking forward to reading more of your work.
Talamh

Wow. I really like this! I really, really like this. Very well written.

You know, I think it would un-nerve me too if I thought someone was supposed to be nuts, and they talked to me normally.

Nicely written (although you have some spelling errors). I liked this fic because it is not something everyone is writing about.

"I was so unstrung by my exchange with Sirius Black I was halfway across the water when I wondered how, with no quill or pen, he would fill a crossword puzzle out."

You know that thought never entered my mind... so when I saw it I sat thinking... what? ..

::rolls eyes:: Of course! Azkaban with it's quill shop so prisoners can do crosswords!

Anyway...

I loved how you portrayed Fudge... very realistic...

Not many people can effectively portray a character like Fudge. Well done! What's really good is the way you stay completely out of the POV of anyone else, which I'd think would be a real temptation in this case. This piece is short, succinct, well managed and superbly crafted. Only the part:

'I laughed, hardly understanding why Black was affecting me so. *He truly must be You-Know-Who's right hand*, I thought; *how else could he be so normal*'

seemed a little forced. Enthralling.

:D Morbane

That's a POV ya don't see every day... Quite good.

You thrill me!