xD Zack has to Sephiroth out, doesn't he? Those poor, poor pins though. Geat story!

lol, that sure gave me a good laught.

HAHAHA, so cute! XD Go Zack. Love the random pins

Oh, how Zack makes me laugh. You characterize him wonderfully.

I like this. Zack's good friend XD

Kisses from Argentina!

Amusement and humor to the extreme.

Signing off to laugh.

that's hilarious. so hilarious.

it would funny if u made another story where cloud has an older twin and they act like hikaru and kaoru from ouran high school host club. good job btw.

ja ne!

It's a shame Sephy's gone evil (and dead) and Cloud's gone...emo... Aerith? Are you okay? AERITH Aw man, gotta go.

that was to funny! I loved it. I didn't like cloud/seph until now

could please write the lemon i would love! to read it

HA A NAKED BOW WEARING CLOUD! UNDER SEPHIROTH'S BED!

Painfully hilarious!

Wow! Just wow.. XD Really awesome fic!

You should write about what ever happened between Seph and Cloud...X3

Funy...funny...good stuff right there.

Hahaha, matchmaker!Zack to the rescue! I'm sure Cloud and Sephiroth both appreciate his efforts. XD Very cute fic!

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