Amazing. I love it. I know you won't continue since this is pretty much a decade old, but I still love it.

oo i like it, its to bad u didnt contiune, it woulda made one heck of a story

Shadow :boogie:

I like this. Very well written, and very in-character (more than I can say about my fics)BRAVO! :)

oh yah that was cool.(amazingly isn' being sarcastic.) i just started reading i feel sick and devi was kickass so kudo to you for making her even cooler in this fanfic and it was still funny even though it was dark. i could relate with the random knife thig thats how i met my best(only)friend but they were paintball guns.kool story hope you wright more fanfics or countinue this one

i know everyone is saying it but

you must write more

in some ways the "devi giving in to sickness" thing is now copyrighted to you and you are a popular authour everyone knows

so if i write a "devi giving in to sickness" fic everyone will say "oh you copied that of Chaotica i hate you" and report the fic as plagarism and it will be banned probably deleting my account(AGAIN i have 5 ff.net accounts and all but one have been deleted)

so that is my compelling reason why you should write another chapter

*rant mode off*

Add, NO! DAMN IT! ADD NOW!

GIMMY! GIMMY! GIMMY! If you don't I’ll bust out blow torch Betty

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dude! WRITE MORE! THIS ONE IS MY FAVE I ALWAYS COME BACK TO IT! PLEZ WRITE MORE!

Awesome!

The mistakes that each of them made during the regular series' were almost intolerable to me because they could have been great together. Their characters so complimented and reinforced each others that they could not only have loved and known happiness, but could have done more to relieve the "stupidity issue" than either could alone. Very well written, definitely a favorite.

I really like that idea... but the story could have had more detail... Maybe told us more of what the characters were thinking, and the events leading up to the incident discribed. The idea of Devi giving into Sickness is a GREAT fanfiction tool, so the posibilities become endless. XD However, I think that ONE of the reasons that she didn't give in, was because, not only is she obviously stronger than Johnny, but were she to become like Johnny, then she might end up with someone who could connect with her on that level that is now immposible cause she killed that kid in the first grade. XD Just some thoughts.

neat-o(holy shit that was scary!...oh. me, not ur story. i liked ur story.)

That was great! I love how you did it, I don't think a sequel is necessary. It might ruin it. Beautifully written.

U must write more. Reverend Meat and the spork command u. I must get a cherry brainfrezeey now...oo, a teanny-bopper... *evil grin*

Ooooh, I like. Pretty pretty please write more? Preferably one where they don't walk away :)