sweet and full of angst. nice work.

Hey :)

I love this series, it's very original...for the love of all things holy, continue it! ..Please?

Two quite different pieces of writing here, each excellent in its own way. I especially like the bit about the difference between a riddle and a secret, well thought out and beautifully expressed.
One little thing: "reinterpretate" should be just "reinterpret". Unless you're George W. Bush. (You're not, are you? Mind boggles at idea of Dubya spending his spare time on Well, everybody should have a hobby.)
But seriously, this is good, thoughtful work. I hope you will write some more, but take your time.

really beautiful!

Wow! These two were absolutely fantastic! You're a great author.

Can't wait for the next 99