Excellent story. The only mistake was that there was too much drama. On a rate to 1-10 i'd give it a 7.4

How dare you turn Scarface into drama for teenagers?

I'm a major scarface fan, and u have a gd plot and should make it more than a one-shot. But here are some tips:

Tony is so ooc!

Gina should say fuck you instead of damn you.

And tony's henchmen dont interfere or ask any questions about his buisness

and tony is bigger than a shed full of pot, for gods sake he's antonio montana a political refuge from cuba :P

nice you should continue

Your review wasn’t very good sir.

Tony does not say “thanks” or smokes pot, he snorts coke.

He has enough money to buy a house of coke, not a shed of pot.

Great story please continue :)

I liked your story, it was intreaging. You should write some more about it. You should tell more about there life on the run. I see why Tony escaped, and definintly would too, no doubt. I liked how you changed the story (Gina and Elvira had kids). I wouldn't have made Elvira in the story, but that's just me. How will Tony cope with all his problems and the ones to come?

My Spin on Scarface by lovetowrite390 reviews

Possible one shot...What if Tony had escaped and Gina lived? And what if both Gina and Elvira were pregnant? Tony's legacy would live on in his child...Rated T for language

Fiction Rated: T - English - Adventure/General - Chapters: 1 - Words: 447 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 11-1-06 - Published: 11-1-06

It was excellent, but I think needed more cocaine.

Hey this is really good. Please update soon. Come check out my Scarface story, The elimination.

That was really, really, good. Please continue it. I'd love to see what happens.

GREAT CHAPTER! Please, continue.