yay! i liked the story! and wut happened 2 that jerk (at least in some stories) mamoru? and i didnt like him anyway, so i dont care wut u do 2 him! well, i wanna no wut happened 2 him but i'll probably like wutever u did 2 him! ~_~ ja ne! ;p

I like the bit at the end it's so cute

love ya loads
SailorMoonFighter

wow... that was dark... rough too... i know that it is obviously hard for you but if you could continue with the story i can imagine it would envelope into something really quite deep and almost sickening... but you know you need all types of stories...if you don't continue thank-yu for giving me the opportunity to read what could be the beginning of something turly amzing!

Different than one usually sees, I'll admit, but I think Mamoru is a jerk in the Anime anyhow. :)

Seiya/Usagi all the way!!

Seiya is the Man! (or Woman, however you wanna put it as)... I just love the interaction between him and Usagi...
can't wait for the next chapter!

Great story, I hope you can update asap.
I'll be waiting!

Good luck!!

Marisa.

WOW!! I so totaly agree! I love it!! I'm a hopeless romantic when it comes to Sailor Moon though... YAY HAPPY ENDING!! sad ones are real downers.

~ISC

Like all things, even good stories must come to an end. Very nice ending. Loved the story. ^_^

Carter

this is pretty dark and i honestly can't wait for the next chapter!!

wow, I was totally blown away by this fic.
I like how it has enough details to serve
the fic, but also to tell what's going on
in gruesome detail. You write some pretty
amazing dark fics!

I have a feeling Haruka's gonna make Mamoru-baka
pay for what he has done, bigtime.

Please continue, I look foward to your next
chapter!

P.S. I hope your friend is doing alright.
Best wishes to her.

O plz plz plz update its just getting good! I'll be waiting ;D

-Moon Bunny

Finally they're discovered! I hope nothing happens to Haruka =/

wow... YAY HARUKA! i like Mamoru, but I'm more of a S/U myself. well, I'm more of a romance person really. So, what turned him so0o0o dark? I mean, just loosing usa's lvoe couldn't have done it really. It had to be something more! I think...?

~ISC

GO HARUKA! No one messes with the ones she cares about. ^_^ I can't wait for more. I get the funny feeling there's gonna be a showdown between Mamoru and the Senshi...unless he's brainwashing them or something...

Glad to hear your friend is okay and all that.

Huh, very interesting! I hope it will make Usagi forget of Mamoru :)