Aw, how cute! I love the pov thing it was quite excellent, ron was great, right on the spot. Hermione too. It's was generally good, just a couple of spellings mistakes, other then that, no real mistakes, but I suggest going back and fixing the spelling though. Keep this up!

MLJ

Attempting new characters is always a challenge, but one you seem to pull off beautifully. I love the Ron/Hermione pairing and found this fic quite endearing. Excellent work.

Eraya ^_~

When I received the alert and saw it was a Harry Potter fic, I was just wishing it would turn out to be a RxH. It's been a long while since I've read a nice, fluffy (and, oh, God, at last a well-written) fanfic about them. Ron, the poor thing. He always gets himself into a big mess, huh?

I really enjoyed the whole piece, the flow was pretty good, the dialogue fitting, and the description was marvelous on its own. In other words, your Ron POV is quite amazing. Added to my favs! Congratulations and keep up the good work!

-hikari