You're an excellent writer. I really wish you'd update this though. Hopefully, you'll find time in the near future. Best of luck with all that life offers you!

WHY WONT U UPDATE!>:(

First off, I just wanted to say that I LOVE this story. It is one of the best fanfics I've read. (And I've read a lot!) As a matter of fact, I think it is THE best LoZ fic I've ever read.
Your idea of how Link got popped out of the past, and of how Impa is his mother, and with the land to the south... How do you come up with such wonderfully imaginative, yet completely fitting, ideas? I think at this point, I wish that your take on Link's mother could be cannon it's such a cool idea.
And as for technique, I love your literary style. It flows and is coherent (and has good grammar, very important) without being pompus. You make things sound so realistic, and yet fanciful at the same time. I like how you've adapted the landscape to make travel time more real than the game actually was. And the way you used Din's Fire to break the chains brings up a lot of useful additions to that skill. It makes me wonder how you're going to incorporate all the other magics.
The short of it is, I can't wait to see how this story turns out. I know you haven't worked on it in quite a while... (gah! just checked the date... almost 4 years!) Not that I can say much, considering I didn't post anything for a year... *sheepish* But I was wondering, why? Have you lost interest in this story, or have you just been incredibly busy? Either way, I guess you have your reasons, but just remember that you have at least one person who is eagerly awaiting the next installment and all the surprises that I'm sure you'll have in store.
Looking forward to more of your wonderful writing,
~Kudos from Seki

anko:OK, BUDDY!NO MOR LITTLE MISS NICE ANKO!UR GOING DOWN!WERE IN 2008!EITHER UPDATE OR ILL CASTRATE U WIF A PAIR OF TOOTH-PICKS!or ill let my army of evil but adorable animals murder u.hm, which is more fun?

becky:umm, letting me live and pretending dis nevah happened?

anko:...no, but nice try!sinslayer, which is more fun?

sinslayer:both.fuse 'em.arm ur evil yet adorable army of animals castrate her wif tooth-picks.

becky:OK, UR NOT HELPING!

TOKE-YOH:shes not suppossed 2 help u.dats da hole idea.

becky:-_-'...@$$-holes.

anko:*looks all innocent wif dose cute little puppy-dog is u cant resit*ive been patient and u still havent updated.y?do u hate me?WAH!

sinslayer:
-- who wants pizza?
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anko: *looks innocent w/ big puppy dog i's* y won't u update?u make anko sad.

sinslayer: cut the crap. we all know u don't act like that.

every1 else: *nods*yea, preety much.

anko: *looks normal*shut up. *goes back 2 innocent look w/ big puppy dog i's*pretty pwease wif cherrys on top? will u update?

y won't u UPDATE?!

that was totally unexpected. by the way, why doesn't link contact saria or epona on the ocarina? he can do it in the video games.

You know,

I've been following this story almost since the first chapter, that was so long ago I'd nearly forgotten all about it.

Then recently I decided to update my favorites and check this out again. I have to say that in spite of how much time has passed, I still believe that this story is amazing. It's well written, exciting, and draws the reader in.

I know it's been years since you've updated, but even still, I'd be very, very happy if you would consider returning to this story!

At any rate, it was fun to read this again XD

Adio!

Sholay

Whoa, this fic, it's kinda awesome. =D Love the imagery, and the way you write Link's emotional roller coaster is really great. Uh, since it's bad form to beg for updates, I'll refrain, but if more of this story -were- written, well, I'd love to read it!

wow... this is pretty sweet. update it please!

*whistles...wow...late review. I found this in a community thing...by the way XD


I know you won't update again, but I really want to comment on such an awesome story! *Story Faved*

I do love this fic. I've been coming back and reading it over and over again for a couple of years now, and was overjoyed when you did the last update. I do hope you plan to continue it, at least to a point where we can find out what happens with Zelda and Chekuko, although it would be much better if everything with Lyon and Link as well as Lyon and the Sheikah was resolved.

I love your characters and the depth they have, and Jared has become one of my favorite OC's, he's so sweet. Impa's brothers as well are interesting, it's very cool to imagine what her family and backstory are like. And Bryant, he's fun to read about.

Just a question, though, something I noticed after the second read or so, is Leo not actually related to Lyon? You mention in Link's PoV that He looks more like Rishto, I find that and his interaction with the Captain to be very interesting speculation. it's obvious they're in cahoots, but I think it's more than just mutual wants.

At any rate do try to update this and few of your others, like "The Reason" and "The White Dog", your writing is too good for it to be missing from fandoms.

My goodness, I didn't want to have to be the one to threaten you with death. But after nearly THREE years, and no update, I must wonder if you yourself are indeed dead, or if I must start sharpening my knives. I hope it's not so. :\

In any case, between this, TWD, BW and DBG, you have me salivating to know what happens.

DAMN YOU! XD

I've been reading this story since about '02' and I'm still waiting on pins and needles for you to write more. I love this fic, and I want to know how it ends, and Lyon's reaction to having yet another son he didn't know about.