Hmm..Very good. Interesting plot, too..I'm not really a fan of OCs, but I guess that you made this kid quite alright...

^^ 21 chapters in one! Gosh, that's an awful long chapter..

Seriously, though. I did enjoy your story. It also sounds like you enjoyed writing it, as I always hate it when people leave out the comedy that's in the show to begin with. It makes it boring! I'm glad you made it unique..

-TeenTitansLover1
:)

Wow! Great story! Aw, but I wanted to see Kenshin in this. I wanted to see what would happen between Kenshin and Soujiro when they both meet again.

Congratulation for the great fic!*wink*
you should write more.