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cutecrazyice
2008-04-07 . chapter 6
This is a great fic. Why discontinued?
Sakura-rocks106761
2007-07-20 . chapter 6
Please, please, please hurry up and update! And I'm not one to beg, either. But this is a special case-PLEASE!


I like the story, can't (much to my annoyance, lol) find any spelling errors, and just wish you would hurry up and fuckin' update, god dammit! Lol, sorry!
Kakashi1334
2007-06-10 . chapter 6
Wait... that was awesome and all but... that was the end?!?!
I really like it though. You're awesome!
optionxx1
2007-05-03 . chapter 6
I am kinda confused... so is Milk Moon going to take over Moonlight? or... is it a sequel to Moonlight? I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS after ch.6 ... it's like KILLING ME!! Ch. 6 was like a HUGE cliffy AND I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPEN NEXT!! PLEASE CONTINUE IT SOMEHOW!! Just tell me if it's going to be in Milk Moon and I'll LOVE YOU FOREVER!! XD
moodiful819
2007-04-25 . chapter 6
I love it. It's bloody brilliant! It's wicked, funny, and tre chic. (I had sugar, hence the strange european lingo strewn like the cans on the backs of wedding limos) I wish I could write like you, but sadly, I can't, so I'll just end my review and put this in my fav's.
Lyneia
2007-04-25 . chapter 6
This was a hilarious chapter! You are a good author. I laughed my head off at the bedroom scene. Can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon!!
In True Meanings
2007-04-25 . chapter 3
Hey this is good. I thought I read something like this somewhere before than I remember you said u rewritten this. Than I checked and I saw I had already made a comment for chapter one, probably from the origional 1st chapter. I have to say though. Sakura and Kakashi's relationship here is a bit jumpy and weird. One minute their friends and the next their avoding each other. There not even dating. Maybe it's just your writing style that is making me think this story is odd. ::shrugs:: I still want to read more though!
Joanie S.
2007-01-17 . chapter 1
You've definitely got me hooked. Can't wait for an update :)
Dolphingirl32173
2006-12-31 . chapter 1
Sarah: um... wow that was... astounding. wow, ya published it 5 days b4 my birthday and updated 4 days after my birthday, what a strange coincidence. love it. update soon, if ya will? this will be in my c2 and on my story alert list
Foxfire Inari
2006-12-13 . chapter 1
I like the re-write! I liked it before, but it was very depressing.

I only found one little nit-pick.
"I am unaware of this has been mentioned in the reports, as I have not been privy to them," he cautioned, and she reigned in her impatience to a short nod.

I think the "of" should either be "if" or "of this being".

I hope the other chapters will be finished soon!
feifu
2006-12-05 . chapter 6
I can't imagine Kakashi without Icha Icha on his person like an additional extremity ^^ In any case, when's the next chapter gona be out? And how many will there be? I just love reading this fic ^_^
Inulover4eva
2006-12-04 . chapter 1
omg why havent you updated! I hope your okay and all is well with the family and your not to stressed.

okay now im going to go all selfish mode, UPDATE RIGHT NOW!! Im dying for this fic to be updated, I love the humour of the recent fics, but i can just TELL your going to revert back to the semi angst, right? right! I hope so...

oh! and rem how i said i kept rereading the ending lines of ch1? i did it again... :pouts: and cried!

"I should have killed you when I had the chance." Conversational, bland, regretting missed opportunities.



im thinking, it wasn't specifically mentioned that he said that to sakura, was he saying that to kakashi?! dear lord,! This story has such mystery, such angst, such humour, and love, undying devotion, and i simply must know sasuk's parting words, please update! Im sucha fangirl of you right now hehehe, and if your not going to go back to all angsty and make it humour through and through until the end im okay with that too, but prays be too good i will probably ask for your permission to make a side story to this, like a one shot or something.

anyways you know i love you and this story, and i should not stress how much i want you to update anymore for i think i have enough hehe
Starcrossedhere
2006-12-03 . chapter 6
This is halarious, adorable, romantic, sad and just absolutely great! I've really enjoyed reading this story so far, and i'm dying for more! Awesome, awesome, awesome. Okay, that's all i have to say.
esther
2006-11-20 . chapter 6
it's actually kind of creepy reading this fic. i feel like it's been written by two completely different, equally brilliant people.

i mean the angst and grit of the first couple of chapters were really IC and looked to be making a promising adventure/angst fic and then suddenly kakashi MOLESTS sakura in his sleep and from there it goes all comedy and raining porn and kakashi being REALLY OOC and calling sakura darling and sweetheart all the time O_O

is it really kakashi? i think sakura really did break him...

i feel like i'm reading two different stories...it's really good, just a bit whack.
Jade Raven
2006-11-16 . chapter 6
HEHEHE! Kakashi's gone insane! Please update soon! I like that Kakashi is the one perusing, so many Saku/Kaka are so angsty and Kakashi is always so conflicted and yada yada yada that's fun too of course but your story is really refreshing!
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