Lovely wording, as usual, although some of the run-ons are making me cringe. (Betas are good, really. I'm languishing from lack of work here.) The "tomorrow" section is particularly good.

(Er, added you to my Author Alerts. Do I need to explain why?)

Fantastic. Your writing is completely unique. I especially love that last line. It gave me chills.

You have a gift, i think, for taking the reader inside your's and the characters head, alike. A knack for creating scenarios so real and yet devastating depressing, (in this case) that a sense of melencholiness (and i'm sure i've mangled that word)washes over you and you forget that it's just a story and it isnt real, that this is just the work of two minds, an author and a fan-author, both simueltaniously creating there own words which are alike and yet you get lost; it is a "drawback' of being in love and insane and very lost inside a peice of fiction.

What can i say? I'm a romantic. Now do me a favor, and write. Not some plot-riddled gibber gharbbish that some people spew out, (my finger is pointing to myself) but WRITE. Just let the words flow out from underneath your fingers, and i have a feeling you'll get a good story, or idea, or a complete piece of trash. (But it will be your trash... :) Sometimes I do that. It helps the mind to think, i wonder. Or Maybe, it's like a shrink to your head. You have to let all the stuff piling up inside your mind, with tangled thoughts and all, to get your thoughts down. And sometimes...you end up like me. :) But sometimes insanity can be a good thing, because it helped me write Apocalypse, my favorite peice so far. :)

Which doesnt say much about me, 'cept i'm hopelessly romantic and hoelessly bomb-happy. Crackers. Nuts. Marble-less.

See? I've done it again and gone of rambling to you. Ah, sorry.

Well, Happy Writing and Good Reading.

arrivederci amici.

Perfect mood piece. Most people can't write a scene to save their life but you... you understand the balance.

Wow, I love it... very intriguing and very different to most of the stuff on here. =]